Aww! That was a cute series of one shots!
~Rebecca Report Review
I've read chapters 1-6 and so far this is the funniest! I laughed a lot and I hoped my brother wouldn't ask me what i was laughing about. This is great. I especially loved Cinderella James. :D
10/10 Report Review
Really sweet lovely chapter.
Cannot wait to read more.
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!! Report Review
Really great! My favourite chapter so far!
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!! Report Review
Oh no! That's the end of all of them! So sad, because I really enjoyed this story! I liked how appropriate the song lyrics were at the start of every chapter and how you had such a variety of romances (or lack thereof) in each chapter. Such a good story! Thanks for writing it!
-SereneChaos, hufflepuffAuthor's Response: Well like I've said before, I didn't want to write the same storyline twelve times and I didn't want anyone to read is that way either. If you want more Weasley though I've got plenty, at least half my stories are this group of kids. Thanks for reading it all the way through, I really appreciate it. Report Review
Hahaha, I love the contrast between this chapter and the previous one featuring the Finnegan girls. Hugo's thought process is spot on (I always imagined him a little like Ron), and I loved how it was Lavender's daughter that was all over Hugo, lol. Rose and Hugo have a funny sounding relationship. And I had no idea there was a response to that song! I must look it up!Author's Response: Hugo is almost totally my own little brother, mine is thirteen so writing this chapter was easy enough, like Hugo my brother has no experience or interest in girls and wouldn't know what to do if one liked him. I liked figuring out the Ron/Hugo/Hermione scene because I think Hermione is the sort of woman to get over her husbands ex-girlfriends quite easily but Ron thinks she can't stand hearing about them at all. Report Review
I had to stay up to read this, as I think Rose/Scorpius is like the poster child for next gen romances. I appreciate that this one is less cutesy than the other pairings you've written before, and that you've established them as a ship already in your story. The dynamic between them here is intriguing, though I'm happy to say, this one story did not end up swamping the other ones before it as I was afraid it might, just due to the sheer popularity of the ship. Great job!
-SereneChaos, HufflepuffAuthor's Response: I was very careful not to spend more time on this one than the others because after all it is a twelve-shot, not a Rose/Scorpius story. I didn't think the two of them would have a perfect relationship, it's too hard normally, let alone when your parents hate each other and one of you is so possessive :) But I think that's one of the things Scorpius loves Rose so much and so it works out for them. Report Review
Another reminder about clarifying which dialogue belongs to which character. Otherwise, friend love is just as good as any of the romance stuff, and I really liked how you touched upon Roxy's appearance. A lot of fanfic I've run into is pretty colorblind, but if you think about it, racial prejudices probably DO exist in the wizarding world as they do in the muggle one. Such an interesting topic that you've touched upon delicately and artfully.Author's Response: Thank you so much, this was the most annoying chapter to write because I kept trying to put the two of them in a dating relationship and it didn't work. As soon as I made them friends it took about half an hour to write. Roxy's appearance was something that I thought about a lot and how she would deal with being the only Weasley that really looks 'different' because I just had to give Freddie red hair. It was annoying though when I was trying to find pictures for the chapter images,both of George's children look unique, there aren't really pictures of the right person so I had to compromise a little. Thanks so much again for these reviews. Report Review
You're probably tired of hearing me praise you...but...this story just makes me ridiculously happy with how good it is. Despite all the romance people write, I find it hard to get into many stories, which is not the case with this one, as I seem to keep looking at the clock at the end of each chapter before deciding 'one more'...XD Your variety in love stories is great--and I think I have time for ONE more, lol.
-SereneChaos, HufflepuffAuthor's Response: I could never get tired of your reviews, I'm so happy you liked the story enough to review almost every chapter. This one of my favorites of my own stories because it was so easy to write, I think it took me about two weeks to write the whole thing. Report Review
Again, I want to say I love the way you don't go into detail about the actual kissing part. A lot of author's tend to go a little overboard in describing exactly how each kiss felt, etc, etc, but you manage to pull off the same (if not more) level of squee and amazingness that they do by letting us readers sit back and use our imaginations. Another lovely chapter. :)Author's Response: I do have one or two stories that have more detail in the kissing scenes but I try to stay away from describing every little thing about a kiss because it loses the magic if you do, at least in my opinion. Report Review
Ahahaha! Your last line was brilliant. I seriously had a tough time trying to place the last name Jordan in my head until George and Angelina mentioned Lee. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
-SereneChaos, HufflepuffAuthor's Response: I loved Lee in the books and so I thought it would be fun if his daughter ended up with George's son. Thank you for your wonderful reviews. Report Review
The thing I really like about your story so far is that you don't overplay the romance. I mean, yes, this is a romance story, but you don't make melodramatic or anything. You keep it simple, and it's delightful to read! I especially liked that this chapter, while just as adorable as the others, did so by getting away with a simple kiss on the cheek. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot to me because sometimes I was afraid I was getting to mushy or going overboard. It was easier in this chapter because they're so young, I think that maybe this was as far as their relationship ever went, I'm not sure though. Report Review
Awww. That was also so cute! Something to keep in mind for the future though, is to try to clarify which character is speaking. You have a dialogue heavy chapter here, and it was confusing reading the back and forth--particularly when Molly would speak, but you'd put Thomas' reaction right next to the phrase. Doing so makes it seem as if Thomas was actually the one speaking.Author's Response: That's a thing I just can't seem to kick, I think it's because I don't want to feel like I'm repeating their names in every sentence. Thanks for the review and I hope you read more. Report Review
That was so cute. I think I'm going to be squeeing for this entire story, but...wow, that was adorable. I loved all of it, from Teddy's hair turning pink, to Harry's cameo (he sounds like such an adult!) to Victoire and Teddy referring to each other as Mr. and Mrs. Lupin. The change in pov works well here, and I'm just excited to start the next chapter!
-SereneChaos, HufflepuffAuthor's Response: I thought the same thing when I was writing Harry, it was strange to have him grown up here and even stranger later on in Hugo's chapter. I have two more Teddy/Victoire stories I'm about to move over here, one that is before their wedding and one that is after it, when they have children. Report Review
All the little stories were really cute. I loved them.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm quite happy with them myself which is strange because I'm usually very unsatisfied with my work. Report Review
Very sweet. I loved it XDAuthor's Response: Well your review matches the title perfectly :) It was one of my favorites to write. Report Review
Very funny!! I loved Ron's reaction XDAuthor's Response: I know, I like the idea of him still scared about Hermione and the ex-girlfriend situation and Hermione being totally over it. Report Review
Really sweet. I loved it XDAuthor's Response: Thanks, I almost cried writing this, I'm not sure why exactly but of all the things I've written myself this is probably in the top three saddest in my mind. But sad in a sweet way sort of. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Very funny!! Loved it XDAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Love it!! Thomas was great, very funny XDAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks, I loved writing Thomas because it was so easy, he just wandered into the story and was very clear about who he was. Report Review
I loved every bit of it :)Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it all. Report Review
xD haha! That's brilliant :)Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you keep reading :) Report Review
So amazing!! I loved all of the stories!!Author's Response: Thanks, I'd say I hope you keep reading but you're obviously finished. Anyway, thanks again for the review. Report Review
Hey! First-off, I love your title and your plot which is very very fresh and new! I love Rose/Scorpius fanfiction, and I really loved your story as well. Is this story posted on fanfictiondotnet? Because I've read the same story there as well! Anyways, all the best!:DAuthor's Response: Thanks, I usually have trouble with titles. I like Rose and Scorpius too, so far anyway. And yes, I posted it on FF, I posted it there first actually and then moved it over here. I got your review on that site but couldn't reply so thanks for that one too. Report Review
I loved this, it was so sweet.Author's Response: Thanks, it was hard because of the letters and having to count words and stuff. But it's also one of my favorites so I can forgive it. Report Review
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