I really like the story until now, hoping more chapters will come soon =]Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so far! The last chapters are already finished, I just need to write the ones in between now. I really want to publish one next week but work always seems to interfere with the good stuff in life ;) Report Review
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Okay, we'll start off with the bad and then go to the good, alright? :) First of all, I think your main issue is spacing. Make sure that when you paste your story in from a word processor that you use "paste as plain text." Then it won't mess with your story, or add extra weird coding.
Another thing is to be careful and make sure it's obvious who's saying what.
Good stuff! I feel like this story has a lot of potential and I can definitely see it going somewhere. Keep your chin up and maybe go to the forums and ask for reviews so that you can get more advice. :)
Good luck! Report Review
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