I always like it when authors explore inconspicuous issues like this. Thought I thought the mother was a bit tough on her daughter, I did understand that it must've been so hard for her to be thrown into such a foreign, bizarre magical world where everything was unfamiliar for her. I must've have been doubly painful that she had to see her own daughter be a tad more different, no? Personally, I would've been amazed, but every mother only wants their children to be born normal and I couldn't blame Rachel here, really. This was a very curious and touching piece and I was glad that I stumbled upon it. Your OCs were all very interesting. Nice job!
xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)Author's Response: Aw thank you. :) I do my best to make interesting characters. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
I really liked it!
Great work! n.nAuthor's Response: :D It took me AGES to write it! I am glad you like it! *hugs* :D Report Review
That was really good! Great job! I liked how you had the mother a muggle and overwhelmed from he daughters gift :) But sad since the mother isn't to happy :( Great Job! I'll send to the results of the challenge to you sometime tomorrow!
Great Job ;)
WhatAboutRegulusAuthor's Response: :D YAY! I was hoping you'd like it! *happy dances* I worked really hard on it! :D Report Review
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