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Review #1, by LoopyandLovely Without You, But I Have To

19th November 2011:
So, I was just trailing through One-Shot's and the Taylor Swift lyrics caught my eye and how could I not read it after that, aha? I really like the way that it's unexpected, it's not the lost romance style story that you'd anticipate after seeing the song you used. I think that you wrote this really well, you nearly had me in tears. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! xx AK

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Review #2, by SeverusSnape15 Without You, But I Have To

8th April 2011:
This story literally made me cry. First of all - Hugo is my favorite Next-Gen character...Poor Hugo. Poor Lucy. This is really cute. My story will have a BIG compitition in the contest against this one, and the other that has been submitted so far. I love it. You're a good writer :)

Author's Response: omg THANK YOU xxAK

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Review #3, by Aderyn Without You, But I Have To

18th March 2011:
Hi! Here for your review.

This is a very interesting and raw story.You certainly did a good job interpreting the song in a unique, unexpected way. I also liked how you used emotions. Lucy's reaction is very real and understandable. I also like the bits in italics as well, they provided helpful context to the story.

Just a quick note about spacing. I'm not sure if you noticed and tried to fix it, but there is a bit too much spacing. You really only need one line between each paragraph.

Overall, you did a good job tackling a difficult topic and were definitively creative with the song.

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Review #4, by Liberator600 Without You, But I Have To

23rd February 2011:
Liberate60 from the forums speaking.

A very nice story. Well written, and you captured Lucy's despair well.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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