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Reading Reviews for How Did I Get Here?
  
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Review #1, by LadyMalfoy23 How Did I Get Here?

16th March 2011:
wow. This was really good for being just a little over 600 words! :) The first paragraph seemed to be very drug on and i had to read it over a couple times to understand what it was saying, but after that i was easily able to understand the story! :)

It was really good and had such strong emotions. I love your explination of his family, and how everyone's lives did go on, but Cedric was still kept alive through their thoughts. This was a really good piece of writing! I look forward to reading some more from you!!

XxJess

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I had actually written this for the Decade challenge that had been due in February but it wasn't validated in time.

I agree the first paragraph is confusing until you get to the first line of the second sentence and realize it described his childhood home.

It's honestly my first very emotional peace. I really dug down deep and it was worth it even being just a page when it's printed out.


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