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Review #1, by slytherinchica08 A Shoulder to Cry On

7th July 2011:
A very interesting idea that Hermione would be the one to want to "test the horizons" rather then Ron but I love that he is dedicated to her and is willing to pick up her pieces when need be. This is actually one of my favorite songs and i think this piece was brillient for it. I liked the way you portray Ron in this story its different then in most which makes me like Ron so much more! Great Fic!

~Slytherinchica08~

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Review #2, by TenthWeasley A Shoulder to Cry On

25th April 2011:
Oh, this was poignantly beautiful, and yet a bit tragic, as well! I love this song and your lyrics went very well with the story. Poor Ron. He just can't seem to catch a break, can he? He gets so close and then... WHA-BAM. Well, at least Hermine didn't reject him outright, I s'pose.

BLAH. I'm rambling; I tend to do that in reviews. But I did like it, as I'm always a Romione fan, and I think you did this one very well! There were a few grammar mistakes, such as:

Oh, that makes sense. Ron smiled, she had come to him after her and David had fought.

The 'her' in the second half of the sentence should be replaced with 'she'. :)

Well done, I enjoyed reading your story!

Author's Response: *Frowns* Really Tenthy? You review my least favorite story?? Grr >:l

It's okay, I s'pose, :D

Grammar: my only weakness- HA, I said only. Thanks for catching that :D

I guess I wont eat your socks anymore. They taste kind of weird anyways...

I agree: poor, poor Ron :( I wuv my Ron but I was feeling mad at the world (it happens quite often) so I wrote this.

So, yay for your review!

I left you a review too, so you best have read it, mmhmm!

Love,
ErinColleen


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Review #3, by unreadable2 A Shoulder to Cry On

10th April 2011:
About my comment...
I said KINDA laughable, in the way that I could never imagine Hermione doing this to Ron or Ron reacting like that. It felt really OOC.
The same thing applies for my 'worst possible couple' comment. For example it would make some sense if it was a Harry/Ginny. Ginny was popular with the guys and Harry although he felt jealous when she was dating Dean he never said anything. See how it fits more?
It wasn't a personal attack. I'm sorry if I made you feel like that. It wasn't my intention. I know it's a story. A song-fic. And the theme is something real.
I know that there are tons of girls out there who are using their 'boyfriends' like that. Like they are some sort of trophies and it would be a shame to waste it with only one man. And the guy just waits for her to whistle. You wrote that very nicely in your story. Honestly...

Author's Response: Your right, it would make sense if it were Harry/Ginny. But, I think it also makes sense as Hermione/Ron.

Thank you for clearing up that this wasn't a personal attack because your previous comment made it seem otherwise.

Love,
ErinColleen



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Review #4, by unreadable A Shoulder to Cry On

10th April 2011:
Hermione would never refer to herself as attractive. It was a very nice effort but you chose the worst possible couple. It was kinda laughable to imagine Hermione doing that thing to Ron, no offence. Hermione is not a slut and Ron would never just accept it calmly to use him like that. Very OOC!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback :)

Your views do make a lot of sense.

Though I respect your opinion I think you could have been a bit more kind in your review. Using the words like "laughable" and "worst possible couple" are kind of rude.

I'm so glad you read my story and left a review but the next time you don't like a story you could try to be nicer and not insult the writer but try to help them improve their writing.

Thank you for your review.

Love,
ErinColleen


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Review #5, by BellaFan202 A Shoulder to Cry On

15th March 2011:
So so so sorry it took me so long to review!

It was short and sweet, and I loved it. That's really all I can say. I just don't know what else TO say, you know? :)

So sorry for the short review, but like I said, I don't think there's anything to say other than the above. :)

~BellaFan202~
(LiveLaughLoveHarryPotter on the forums)

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't expect to win anything, I'm so happy!

I had so much fun writing this.

Thank you for reviewing!

Love,
ErinColleen


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Review #6, by Happy A Shoulder to Cry On

24th February 2011:
Do not yet Hermione use you like that Ron, you'd be better off with Lavendar.

Author's Response: Hey, I like Hermione haha

I found Lavender a bit annoying personally, but hey, we all have our opinions.

Isn't it sad how Hermione used him? :(

Thanks for your review :)

Love,
ErinColleen


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Review #7, by hpgrl A Shoulder to Cry On

20th February 2011:
Hello!
I love this song! The story fits nicely with the song. It was so sad though, poor Ron, I can kind of see this happening to him. I caught 2 spelling mistakes, I'm not trying to be picky or anything- I just like when ppl point out spelling mistakes to me in their reviews cause I probably wouldn't notice them otherwise-
'Oh, that makes since.' since should be sense
'forced to buy his father.' buy should be by.

Great job! keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I hate spelling mistakes too, so thanks for catching them :)

I know it's sad, but they get together in the end, right? This is just when they're young and trying to figure it all out.

Thanks for reviewing!

Love,
ErinColleen


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