Hi. I LOVED this story. Not only is it entertaining but well written as well. I want to hear more about the Weasley family.
Hope to see more works from you.
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EXCUSE ME!!! BUT WHY HAS THIS STORY NOT GOT ANY REVIEWS YET?? the banner alone should draw attention to you story, but your story itsself it ... Wow... Dear Molly Weasley, who was created and re-written by this wonderfull person, please come be my new mother!! Forever your new daughter, MyMyMiss...
-Molly Weasley was surrounded by boys. *Inserts sarcasm here* Really noone would of guess ;) being a Weasley and all ^.^ x
-Fred and George had crawled out of their cribs, and were now grinning evilly into Ronís. *inserts rolling on floor for fifteen minutes here* So much Fred and George. Definetly something those cheeky twins would do!!! LOL.
May I suggest one small minor, itty, bitty thing O.o Respace your gaps ;) There wide, like really wide, there's like a gap bewttween each oaragraph, big enough to fit another paragraph. Readers hate reading Huge spaced things, or perhaps that's just my own personal thing not sure ^.^
But anyway :P ...
This story was really humourous, but serious, but funny, but adorable, "I'mnot cute/adorable - I can't remember which you said - I'm thirteen!" I was like haha sucker!! :P
-Mollyís mind returned to her new baby. If it were a girl, she would make sure that it was not a bimbo. No, her daughter would be independent.
This one just hit Ginny right on the head didn't it >.< This was an awesome story, and because i'm over at the forums, don't know if you are, but if you are your story is about to be recommended ;)
Brillant Read here!!!
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