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Reading Reviews for Roll With The Changes
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Guest A Chance Meeting

18th August 2014:
This is really good and very different, since I haven't seen a Draco/Lavender pairing before now. There are quite a few spelling errors, but it's easy to figure out what you meant to type. I think the kiss was a little sudden, so I think a little more time should have been spent building up Draco's feelings for Lavender in previous chapters or in this one. I really like your plot so far and can't wait to see where you take this story.

Author's Response: I wanted the kiss to be sudden so it threw them both off and to show that Draco had always had these feelings for her. I haven't even gotten started lol. Thanks for the review!!

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Review #2, by ScorpiusRose17 Prolouge

29th May 2012:
Hi there!

I really like the start of your story!

I thought it was interesting to see the changes that are occuring between Draco and Lavender. It was really nice to see things from both points of view.

The characterization was great for both of them and I really liked how Lavender is living as a muggle. I have always wondered what would have happened to her after the war. I am glad to see a certian perspective to a lost part of the story.

I also thought that the descriptions were great. I was able to picture everything that you were describing. I also thought that even though it is short, it is a really great way to start your story.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: I finally was able to put up a new chapter, it is waiting for validation. Thank you so much for your review! Hope you keep enjoying and keep reviewing!

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Review #3, by Owlpost68 Prolouge

6th March 2011:
hmmm that was pretty interesting, I wouldn't have thought of a story starting out with those 2 characters before. very original! I'm just wondering where this story is going. it's definitely got me curious. good job!

Author's Response: Im getting ready to post the next chapter now. thanks for reviewing. hope you like it!

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