aww, I love it so much :) it was so sweet, and seemed so well thought out. Very detailed in their characters, even when it didn't seem that way at first. I loved the flow, seemed to move at just the right pace. I think the thing that hits me most, is how heartfelt it is. They were all pretty much acting from their hearts :)
Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, that just made my day.

I said at the beginning that I'm not a big fan of Valentine's Day, but it seemed so perfect as a story for the two of them. I'm glad I succeeded, I was nervous about that.

Thank you very much for reviewing, I truly appreciate it.

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I still love this chapter. they're both falling in love with each other, even if lily doesn't know, and james in a different way than he had :) it's soo sweet!

Author's Response: There's more I want to do with this chapter, and when I have time I'm going to expand on that exact theme.

Thanks for reviewing.

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I want to say I love this story. I think it's important for him not to change just for a girl. I'm glad he's going about it in a way he's himself

Author's Response: I thought so, too. The whole "Change for Lily so she'll love me" bit always drove me crazy, but it was useful as a story, so I mixed it up.

I'm glad you love it.

Thanks for reviewing.

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OOh this I like
Soory to be this demanding
Tottaly favouriting your story

Author's Response: Hey, we all have standards. You're just encouraging me to reach a bit higher, don't apologize. I appreciate that.

I also appreciate that you're favoriting it! Thanks for reviewing.

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Ack, I thought there were more chapters lol I find myself really liking this story! he's actually being himself :) so of coarse it works :) I love your writing, very easy to read. Can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Short queue allows me far more opportunities to update. I'll get to it quickly, I promise.

I really appreciate you saying that. Thanks for reviewing.

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