oh i love this story especially James (II) and Lily (II)

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I really adore this story... Harry and Ginny are my favorite couple in the HP world. You really did them justice in this story

Author's Response: Sorry for the late response but thank you so much for reviewing :)

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Wow, I laughed I was near tears and I was happy. I think that this is really good. I love Harry and Ginny... a little to much atcually. I keep a playlist with all the songs that remind me of them, I keep playing the part in (HP/DH/P1) When Harry runs towards Ginny, and Remus holds him back. I love Harry and you did them justice. Guess who just got a favorite?
Lizzie

Author's Response: Me? :D
I'm so glad that you liked the story.

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Ahh, I loved that! I was cute, and Lily, James, and Al were absolutely adorable! I also think you captured Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny well. I really did like it, and I'm gonna add it to my favorites!

10/10
~BellaFan202~
(LiveLaughLoveHarryPotter on the forums)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)

I had a lot of fun writing this, so I'm glad you enjoyed it

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I loved this! You did brilliantly with the gradual character development of Harry. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it

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i like this short story, but why was it always on james brithday?

Author's Response: I was trying to keep the day consistent and since we don't know when exactly J.S.(James Sirius) was born, I just used that to show how Harry's family grew as he did.

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A very good story, though I think you could have gotten a few more chapters out of it. I have to give you 10/10.

Author's Response: Considering this is for the Writer's Duel, I had to try and keep it a one-shot. Thanks for your rating and for reading :)

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