Wow another wonderful chapter! I rally like this story. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: And thank you again, the third chapter should be up in a week or so. I do hope you continue on reading :)

-Reyes91

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Really good chapter and really good idea for a story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you,

The whole idea of doing this all stems from that challenge; I don't think I could have decided to write a chapter for each next-generation child without a challenge.

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I liked it^^

I prefered chapter 1, but this was really good too^^

keep it up^^

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Yeah, I prefered the first chapter as well. Writing James II is...difficult for me. I just had to get his character out of the way.

Thanks again!

-Reyes91

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OMG!

Brilliant!^^
I really loved the way Fred was so different than in other next gens. Very original, well made,

keep it up!^^

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't know I like Fred II so much; maybe because it's so easy and fun to make him different and not just follow everyone else as much.

Thank you for this review,

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hi,
I just wanted to say that this was really good. i only spotted one mistake - Fred knew what was suspected of him, they all did. - i think it should be expected instead of suspected.
Its nice to read something about Fred because there aren't many stories about him and i like how you've written it. Like how Fred didnt avtually want to be in Gryffindor or play Quidditch or prank people.
This was a really good first chapter and i cant wait to read more but i am confused about one thing - Is this whole story going to be about Fred, which, by the way would be awesome, of are you going to write about the next gen as a whole with a chapter for everyone?

-Rommana

Author's Response: Hello,

Thank you. Yeah, I had expected, but changed it to suspected for some reason. Don't ask, I really don't know why I flipped them. *may just have to go back and change it...some day lol*

Yeah, Fred is interesting, and I kind of don't like it when he's written as a replica of his father or dead uncle. Honestly, I don't care when any of the next generation crew are written exactly like the older adults when they are seperate people.

Unfortunately, this won't be completely about Fred as it's a short story collection of all the next generation characters for a challenge. Each character is going to have their own chapter dedicated to them.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Reyes91

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YAY RAVENCLAW! ! ! ! !
this is brilliant i loved it! ! !
I never thourght of how Fred would feel about his name and expectations and everything but this is really really good! ! ! !! ! ! !
thanks 10/10
xx :D xx

Author's Response: Haha, yes, Ravenclaw. It was the first House that came to mind. Obviously, I see it was a good choice. Lol.

I'm glad you enjoyed this, dude.

-Reyes91

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