That was different. I kind of have this perfect image of Draco and Astoria, but oh well that's just me. I'm quite a sucker for happy ending. This is brilliant though. Maybe i'll try experimenting with these two.Author's Response: Ahh well I'm a bit more pessimistic than you, I always tend to imagine Draco and Astoria's relationship as being seriously dysfunctional in one way or another xD I'm glad you enjoyed it though, and thanks for the review! Report Review
That is an absolutely brilliant one-shot! I am inspired to go out and write Draco/Astoria. They seem so.. perfect.
At least in your way. You've made them exceptionally dysfunctional and I adore the style you write in. BRILLIANT. (:Author's Response: Thanks so much! Oooh do go and write one! And then PM me with the link, I'm currently obsessed with all things Drastoria ;) dysfunctional!Drastoria is definitely my favourite way to write the ship though - I just think Draco would have so many issues in his life after the war, and let's face it, Astoria must be quite an... interesting... character to be able to marry an ex-Death Eater. So yeah, I like to imagine them as super dysfunctional :P
Thanks so much for the review, and I'm really glad you liked it :)
Wow. Just wow. That was amazing.Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I've got rather a soft spot for this piece so it means a lot that you enjoyed it :) Report Review
This was amazingly good (:
I haven't really read a lot of fics that have mostly dialogue in them and the ones I have they haven't been really all that, but you worked this really well and there was so much emotion in it and so much explanation without there needing to be much description (:
I think you've done really good on this and I loved the last line it really tied things together - that just really did it for me, haha.
beaut fic xxxAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad the emotion came across well - I was worried about getting it right as, obviously, people in this kind of situation would be feeling some pretty strong emotions, I'm sure x) It really means a lot to know you enjoyed this because I know it's a bit... odd... and I wasn't entirely confident about it :P So thank you so much for reviewing, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
Its acrules from the forums. I realy like it. I reallly really like it!
I love how it's almost entirely in speach - which could be really dry and boring, but it's not - it's perfect. Infact I think any more description would have slowed the whole thing down. The relationship was perfect with the lying and the divorce and Scorpius - really really believable.
Your amazing at dialogue too, you seemed to convey everything we needed to know about their characters through it, which was great. I can't actualy think of anything else to say, except that I love it :DAuthor's Response: Hi acrules! Yayyy I'm so glad you liked it :)
I'm not sure where the whole let's-write-a-story-entirely-in-speech (almost) thing came from, as I've never really considered dialogue to be my strongest point, but oh well :p I'm really glad you liked it as it was a bit of a gamble! I love dysfunctional!Drastoria, as I can never see them living happily ever after, so as soon as I saw Bad Romance I knew I had to write them. I'm relieved it was believable :) I was worried it might be a bit OTT and obscure...
Thanks for the review, and for the brilliant challenge as well, I really enjoyed doing it :D Report Review
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