Oh..my..Sirius :o love this! I with you made this into a story! I love it, how it is and everything! You should make an other chapter in Sirius POV. I always wonder if he had feelings for her, which is why he was so pissed when told him what he was to her; only a distraction. I felt bad for the both of them, wish Sirius would had let her explain but that just made it better. Yeah, I don't know what I'm going on about but great one shot :)
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I think you should continue this, the way you wrote it was amazing. You are a talented writer. Report Review
I really love it! It's killing me that I don't know who the boy is, though. Any hints? Beautiful story. 10/10Author's Response: Haha.. who do u want it to be? ;)
No but, it's meant to be Sirius but if u have someone else then I'm gonna leave it up to ur imagination.
Thank u so much for ur review. It truly made my day. :) Report Review
One question - Which boy was the one standing next to her in the hospital? A little more detail should hint at an answer.
You played her emotions well, and the pace was fine as well.
Overall, the detail was fine.
Good job all in all; especially given the hard subject matter you have chosen.Author's Response: The boy in the hospital is Sirius, and as I read it now i understand what u mean, a bit more detail would make it much clearer.
And thank u so much for ur review! :D Report Review
Really, really good story. I love it, how detached she is, but everyone thinks shes perfect, how she feels nothing, but she want to feel something. I really wish this wasn't just a one-shot. You should make it longer, cause its really good, and I would love for it to be like, a novella. But I suppose if you wanted it to be more than a one-shot you would have written it as such. =[ well anyways, I really liked this, your a good author, you should keep writing really good stories. =]Author's Response: I've actually thought of writing it into a short story, like in more detail and such. But I haven't decided anything yet, it would be fun to develop Aurora's character a little more.
But thank you so much for your reveiw! Made my day :)
I loved this. I listen to old rock...but this song is perfect. I love it. And I love they way this story is perfect for the song. This story touched me. It's like it's full but it's empty. Like a body, but with no blood or soul. I hope you get what I' saying. Thanks for showing me this song and for writing this story that I'm in love with.
-Vi.Author's Response: Wow, I can't tell you how happy it makes me hearing you say that. Thanks you and so glad you liked it!
- Emilia Report Review
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