I absolutely love this story. Will you please write more? It is so well written! Report Review
i really like this, Lily's internal struggle is quite well portrayed by you and its funny how she remembers all the good things about James against her own will. i think this could be an interesting story if you add a few more chapters and really show us how he is annoying her and at the same time being charming, instead of just telling us about it.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it (: I know it was short but I'm planning on making this story 5 chapters long, definitely with lots more detail. If you want to read more, the second chapter, Torn, should be up pretty soon! Thanks for reviewing, I love the feedback :D -bc Report Review
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