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Review #1, by malfoygirl101 Shut Your Eyes

17th September 2011:
Magical. It takes my breath away. It is so, so very beautiful. I wish all stories were like this. So full of care, and detail, and beauty. Never stop.

Author's Response: Seriously, you're gonna make me teary. Thank you. Really.

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Review #2, by Loony_Scorpy Shut Your Eyes

4th August 2011:
That's it. :D
But I have more! Haha well I actually haven't read a Lily/Sirius before but this was just amazing! I think it would definitely be a struggle to find another so tastefully done! I actually understood it and didn't need your end note which is definitely a good thing! Well I knew it was L/S because of the description thing but otherwise... :D brilliant :D

Author's Response: Oh, well, I'm glad mine could be the first! I've always found the idea of Sirius/Lily very interesting, so I like writing it.
I'm so glad! I was quite worried when I first posted this that no one would have any idea what was going on.
Thank you very much!

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Review #3, by Miss Lily Potter Shut Your Eyes

9th May 2011:
So. I read your reviews that you left me and I thought to myself "Well, this person is the nicest person you've ever come across - AND LOOK! SHE WRITES SIRIUS/LILY!" So I made my way over here to find the S/L you'd written.

This was... wow. It was chilling and brilliant and it hurt my heart, the way he was still thinking of Lily, and how he wanted to live but only with her memory... I can imagine them being so secretive, James knowing without actually knowing... Wow.

This was powerful and wonderful and so, so good. Great job.

Author's Response: Awh, you're too sweet! :D
Sirius/Lily is just so great. I always have such fun writing it. If you liked this, too, I've got plenty of other S/L's, a few other oneshots from the Snow Patrol Project, and then just a short story entitled Grenade.
I really don't even know what to say. I'm so, so happy you enjoyed this, and... just wow. Thank you so much. Really. It means just... just more than you can imagine. Your words warm my heart. Thank you, thank you.

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Review #4, by Dalek194 Shut Your Eyes

23rd February 2011:
A nice one-shot. Like the third bar one, it is set cleverly in the main character's mind while they are somewhere else (Azkaban in this case) but wish they could be back in their memories.

I've never read much Sirius/Lily, but they are actually quite a good couple and you show this here. So nice job :-)

P.S. One question; what was the "When things get rough, Sir, just remember us." part about? I didn't get that - is that from the song? All the same, great work!

Author's Response: Yea, I really do like writing things like this, :)
It's fun, setting them in another state of mind so they can escape the situation at hand, if only for a moment.

Awh, thank you, :D
It really has become one of my favorite pairings, so I had a lot of fun writing all of their oneshots.

It's not part of the song, no.
It's part of the many lines Sirius remembers Lily saying to him. Everything is sort of just scattered (as it's stream of consciousness), and that was the first memory that brought him back to everything.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #5, by weasleywishes Shut Your Eyes

7th February 2011:
I loved it but Im a big Lily Siruis beliver always though there is more to their friendship. anyway i think ure experimant awsome.
luv weasleywishes

Author's Response: Oh, I totally agree.
There was definitely something there at some point. There's no denying it.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, though, :D

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