omigosh...OMIGOSH. i cant. i just cant handle this. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! this is seriously unbearable. i love your story...literally just spent the whole day locked in my room doing nothing else but reading it! :)

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ugh
one more reason i hate one direction
they stole my fav author..
:( boo!

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THIS IS THE MOST FUNNIEST THING I'VE EVER READ. I CAN HARDLY TYPE, SEEING AS IM CRYING WITH LAUGHTER. THIS IS AMAZING, NEVER EVER EVER STOP WRITING. PLEASE. ;D

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It has been much too long since you latest update,
and I have been making me sadder and sadder, so I
decided to revisit all the stories that I love but
haven't been updated and plead to you, the writer,
to update. I'm hoping that you writers realize that
at least one person still cares and wants the next
chapter. I hope you know that I'm a writer and I
know how hard it is to stay on top of writing
stories.
P.S. I pray the only reason you haven't written is
because you have writer's block or have just been
too busy to, and not because something bad has
happened to you or your family.

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If I gave you a cupcake would you update? Please? Pretty Pretty Please? I love this update and I really think you should update :) Please?

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UPDATE NOW OR I WILL FIND YOU AND AVADA KEDAVRA YOU!!! just saying...

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UPDATE PLEEEAAASE!this story is amazing!

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I just re-read this entire story and I love it even more than I did the first time. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update.

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I IMPERIO YOU TO UPDATE



pretty please?

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just wanted to say.once you become a directioner...theres no way of stopping it:) im a hardcore directioner i should know...

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I need you to update asap! I can't keep reading the same chapters over and over without something new being added... When is your next update gonna be? Will you please become re-obsessed with this and finish the bloody story!

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update?? please? pretty please? with cherries on top?

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AAH. I think I've gotten too attached to Fred-Dessie! I'm so anxious/excited to see what comes next! I'm always checking for updates... but I realize that you have a life too. ;) Thanks for writing this!

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I love you, yet I hate you.
How could you leave me here? Bitch, I love this to death and right after a smexy scene there's just... nothing.
Do you have no dignity?
And yay, she's finally realised how awesome Fred is. However I couldn't stop wondering how hard she ripped his shirt off, because I do sewing at school and me and my friend tried for ages to rip off our handiwork... It didn't work :(

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I totally love this story!!! I really hope you continue it :)

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woo!! Snogging scene!! Brilliant snogging scene as well, Fred's getting a bit attached isn't he : P asking personal questions. That's awesome that she's having twins, but kind of bad luck as well cause that's a lot of money... it's funny that they snogged in the past but it doesn't mean anything so it's all good. Oh oh for Dessie when Roxy finds out, she's not going to be a happy chappy. Pretty please update again!!

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yes i did quite like this chapter, it was funny and i loved the snowball fight, mainly cause it doesn't snow in Australia where i live and i love snow so it was fun to read about things like that that could be tradition : ) I liked the rest of them, Al was funny and i liked Lily cause that's just too cute to not like. Favourite parts? umm... from the first sentence to the last one? hahaha i just loved it all!!

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I think you made Mason into the best character, random bits thrown in and all that. He wasn't what i expected him to be, you think older brother-over protective, manly, tough-and that's what comes to mind, but you made it perfect! Favourite snippets would be her and her hypothetical question and Masons reaction hahaha. Chapter in general was good, but you made me want hot chips because of your mentioning them in the chapter

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hahaha, loved it! I swear, that i laugh so often when i read this, that if you lived an extra hour each time you laugh then i would live for an extra hundred years because of this story. Pretty please update soon!

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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! AWESOME!! :D Pls post the next chapter soon!!

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hmm... favourite part/quote? i'll have to do part cause there are lots of brilliant quotes. So favourite part would be... The part where James has found out that this is not just a one off : D I think that is a very brilliant part. Have you been in a situation like this? because you seem to write very well about it... *raises eyebrow*

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Hahaha I love how he was yelling at her when he got someone else pregnant, but i don't think i would have realised this if you hadn't put it in hehe. My favourite part would have to be the end though, their snogging and James walking in. No you're quite good at snogging scenes, better than lots of people on this site, better than me, thats for sure.

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Ah! It's been so long since you updated! You really need to! I have been checking every day and every day, nothing! Please, please please please! You'll be my best friend?

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OMG THE HEINOUS ELVES. THAT IS AWESOME.

but so short? why? why would you do that? what is the meaning of this? :(

I cannot work out whether this is a cliffhanger or not and it's killing me and all the questions ... why is Roxy looking for them, why is James so panicked, are Heidi and Tosh now Hosh and omg the HEINOUS ELVES NO IT IS NOT GETTING OLD.

much love for this story. much love for the heinous elves. omg. and much love for fred. wow. abs. yes.

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i like it lots :) looking forward to more

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