This story is outstanding! Your writing is well-conceived and really flows nicely. When will you update next?? Please update soon!

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I'm really enjoying this story, and the writing has a good flow to it.
update soon please!

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i'm really enjoying the story so far
RIP alicia, i'm glad someone is still sharing your story

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Please Please Please update soon!!!

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This story is brilliant - I've added it to my favourites! I'm sure your friend, Alicia, would have been very grateful for you carrying on her story.

Another great chapter! :)

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You are an amazing writer! I loved this wholoe chapter, it was great! I just hope that they can hold off not being together for a little while longer. I hope when those 2-3 weeks are up and Scorpius has won his case that Rose, him and Leo can be a family! Leo is the sweetest kid ever! and im so glad him and Rose get along so well! Once again I loved this thank you so much for he update!
Update again SOON please!!:)
-Brooke

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Yay! Yay! They are together now! Well...not really but they are sort-of! OMG! I am so happy! The wait was definitely worth it!

I really like how there's so much complexity in your story but you make it seem so easy. The family having knowledge on Rose's heartbreak would certainly not be happy about any of this relationship thing. Jade and Chad...they won't be together forever...I think this chapter cleared that issue for all of us.

Now, I just await the verdict for Leo...so everything else can move on. And...why do I have a feeling that Jade will win the case? I do hope not. :

Any who, great chapter! You have no idea how much I love this story. I mean..yeah you do take quite some time publishing the chapters but the wait is always worth it. You're a fantabulous writer! I can't wait for Chapter 14!

Awesome job, Chapter 13,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I' glad you're like Alicia's story. I knew she would've appreciated all of these reviews!

I do apologize for the wait, though. It's more life getting in the way of putting up the chapters than anything because everything's pretty much done. I'm trying harder to keep things moving on a more timely basis, though, so hopefully the updates will be quick like how they were this week.

Everything will come to light shortly! The story is really about to start rolling!

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Great chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Stay tuned for an update.

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AH! I Don't know if I should be happy or sad! I love this it is amazing! I can not wait for the next update. I am so glad for the R/S but I want them to win the case at the same time!

Author's Response: Next update is up and coming! There's a lot more to come so I hope you stay tuned!

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Wow. You really write darn well. And the story's so good, too.
I like the intensity, the mix of family, friends, lovers, conspiracies and ...well, I'm anxious to find out how the case turns out. I mean, I don't believe you'll let Jade have Leo. But I do think there's more trouble to face. I'm just glad that -finally- more people know about it and that Hermione warned her. And I'm so so relieved, that Rose and Scorpius finally really talked and cleared everything up.

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I owe the writing to my friend, Alicia. I'm just continuing on with her story and hoping that my editing skills are doing it justice. Stay tuned for more!

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Just wow! I really, really love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're loving it and stay tuned...there's a lot more to come.

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HAHA!! Jade Olivia...I laughed so hard when I read her name.
Anyway, I love your story, I think its simply marvelous

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So much suspense! I'm excited to find out what happens in the next chapter!

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Thank you so much for updating! I loved it! I'm so glad Rose is finally going to tell Scorpius, but 2 weeks? Come one! I really Hope Hugo isn't another obstacle for them! That would suck! Any who, Thanks again for the update!
Update again soon!!:)
-Brooke

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OMG. This is amazing. Pure and utter BRILLIANCE. I'M BEGGING (begging begging begging begging begging begging begging) someone TO CONTIUNE UPDATING. I love this so much. I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS. PLEASE. PLEASE PLEASE. Fantastic.
COULDN'T LOVE THIS ANYMORE.
FAV. Rose/Scorpius IN AGES
FOREVER LOVE THIS STORY. ALWAYS LOVE THIS STORY.
RIP. I love you.

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Another beautiful chapter! I really feel for Scorpius and Rose; they really can't catch a break. And now Hugo seems to get involved too ...

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I've been reading this story for the last few hours and I have to say I love it! It's so different from anything else I've come across and I love the dynamic pull between Rose and Scorpius and the intertwine with the challenge to get his son and to be with Rose. It's so. - don't think I have words, lol

But this chapter in particular. Man! Chad is a big ol' meanine! Why can't he leave Rose alone? Then again, I guess that wouldn't make for such a dramatic story. And I agree with Rose. Everytime it starts to go somewhere, something pops into the way. It'll be interesting to see how this new issue of Counciler/Client pegs out...I sense some serious drama still to come. But I love it!

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LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! YOU HAVE SUCH NICE VOCABULARY TOO BTW

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Thanks for the update! I love this story!!!

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I really love this story I hope you update soon!

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*jaw drops* That bastard! What's he up to now? Oh, he just had to surface and throw a monkey wrench in this. JUST as Rose starts to come to her senses. Gah!!!

So waiting to read more!

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love Astoria! great chapter as always, update soon :)

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I'm in love with this story! You're doing great! Please update soon!

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AH! I can not wait for more! I don't like chad, I dont like him at all...I love this keep it up!!!

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Oh wow, that's quite some cliffhanger! It seemed to good to be true to have them be from Scorpius!
Great chapter!

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