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Review #1, by maskedmuggle I.

23rd February 2011:
Hello! :)
OK, FIRST THINGS FIRST, I AM SO TERRIBLY SORRY FOR MY EXTREMELY LATE REVIEW!! Hopefully the compliments will make up for it! :D

Well, I really enjoyed this! From the sounds of it, Harry/Hermione was a bit of a challenge for you, but I have to say you pulled it off really well. You kept the dynamic between the two realistic, while also building on what Harry was feeling/what was happening.

Your writing is fabulous! Everything flows so well, and once I got into it, I didn't stop reading. The dialogue, the action, the description; everything is wonderfully written :)

I really loved Harry and Hermione's characterisation. Spot on in my opinion. You kept them both realistic, and their characterisation was definitely in canon, which is a big plus!

A really beautiful one shot! :) Thanks for participating in my challenge, and once again, my deepest apologies for the ridiculously late review >< Truly though, this was a wonderful fic to read, and I can see you're a talented writer! :)

Author's Response: Don't be sorry. I'm sorry it's already next month and I'm just replying back to you. :)

Yes, they were a challenge. I'm a fan of AU ships, but these two were a struggle. I think it's more writing Harry that's tough. After seeing clips of the last movie though, it made it a bit easier for me. That dance scene with the two nailed it, helping me slide into their mood at the time.

I'm very thankful for the compliments, dude. Definitely a challenge, but I think I may push myself a bit more concerning what I write about. It's fun sometimes to challenge myself.


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Review #2, by vishal I.

16th February 2011:
great going buddy...would like to read ur next chapter plz post it fast :)

Author's Response: Thank you, vishal. Honestly, there isn't going to be another chapter since this was just a one-shot. I'm glad you enjoyed it though ;)


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