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Reading Reviews for A Tale Of Two Weasleys
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ashtree 1. A Series Of Introductions

21st June 2012:
I love it i like how you switch from Victoire to Dominique and how there personalities differ like how Victoire finds no need to play quidditch while Dominique absolutely loves it.

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Review #2, by Fae 1. A Series Of Introductions

21st June 2011:
I liked it. The sarcasm was funny but the characters used it similarly. I know they're supposed to be a girly girl and a tomboy but besides that they're the same. But i like the blastended skrewt reference and would like to see James in action. Good job. Work on their differences.
i would give a 8.5 but since there is none im saying 8.
-Fae

Author's Response: Thanks for the criticism and reviewing, I am flattered that you like the humor and will work on making the difference more apparent. I know that it has taken literally 3 months (or more) to put up the new chapter, but half of it got deleted and I was kinda discouraged. I'm going to start working on it again now that there have been more reviews. If you like the sarcasm, then please read (and review) my other story, which I hope you'll enjoy. It's a James/Lily story don't know whether you like that, but... (and yes I know blatant advertising is kind of a turn off, but I'm kind of losing faith in my readers on that one). Once again, LOVE YOU for reviewing, and re-encouraging me. :)

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Review #3, by Ashtree 1. A Series Of Introductions

21st June 2011:
i loved your intros, they were great. Although i think that you could add more about what there expecting from the school of hogwarts whether they think that it will be easier or harder to go to school there.

Author's Response: Only one of them is starting to go to the school and I was trying to get across that they thought it was a failure of a school that would be much easier than Beauxbatons (did I spell that right?). Anyway, glad you liked and thanks so much for reviewing and giving constructive criticism. I LOVE reviews! If you can review my other story that would be fantastic too. I haven't gotten any reviews for that one so...

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Review #4, by Zenna 1. A Series Of Introductions

13th February 2011:
I am really interested in Victoire's reaction once she sees Hogwarts. Good? Bad? I think it will be funny to see Roxanne, baby form. I like the phrase "oxymoron in action". Well, WRITE MORE!

Author's Response: I am currently about half way done the next chapter, and then a couple of days of validation. The next chapter will be called, Chapter 2: A Series of Descriptions that Drag on and the Burrow. From now on I will include an excerpt from the next chapter (in the author's note) to keep you guessing. I hope you like the rest.

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Review #5, by Star Maye 1. A Series Of Introductions

12th February 2011:
I think Dominique is a little one-dimensional, I like the plot you have so far with Victoire and, in general, start the plot next chapter, find the romance for Dominique, and try and incorporate Rose, she's my favorite next gen. Weasley.

Author's Response: I'm sorry Dominique was one-dimensional and I will try to work on that, she is definitely less one dimensional in the new chapter. I agree with you, I like Rose too and will try to incorporate her too. The plot will also start during the next chapter which will be set at the Burrow (for the second half)

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