This strangely reminded me of a relationship I carried out when I was that age (16 to 17). It was always like that, come back, go away. I'm guessing his teenage mind was playing a nasty game of cat and mouse with mine.
But I understood this story and what it was about, and where she was coming from. I really enjoy this project of yours.
XoXoAuthor's Response: I'm so glad! I was going through a sometimes testing relationship at the time of writing this project, so I think some of it bled through in my writing. Thank you so much, :) Report Review
Really beautiful, Sounds like poetry. I love it very much, lovely writng style. Keep it up! xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :D Report Review
I'm crying. No joke. I am crying and I'm also dying inside for Sirius. He deserves her love so, so much. I love it.Author's Response: Oh. You're making me all emotional. Thank you! Report Review
This is brilliant! In my opinion, you should make this like a preview to a novel. I would love to read about how Sirius gets her back for good.Author's Response: That would be an interesting read, but I'm not sure I'd ever have the patience to do a full blown Sirius/Lily. They just seem so angsty to me, and I can't imagine her with anyone else, ultimately, than James.
But thank you so much! Report Review
Like ^^^ :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This was really good! I don't usually read any Sirius/OC stories, but this one was really good! I don't think it was actually very confusing. It just shows Sirius and his conflicting emotions about Lily.
I wonder why he kept calling off their relationship all the time? I thought he loved her? Ah well, as long as they stay friends, I'll be happy. :)
Great job! 10/10
xxAuthor's Response: I'm not really sure why he did either.
It's Sirius, though, so I'm never really sure why he does anything.
If you liked this, make sure to check out the other Sirius/Lily ones: "If There's a Rocket, Tie Me to It" & "Run".
Thank you so, so, so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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