This is an amazing story. The way you write is amazing. Kudos.

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This is gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Wow. Just wow.
That was incredible.
I love all the detail you added to this. It was really easy to imagine the room and everything that was going on, the imagery was amazing. I think you kept Hermione and Draco totally in character, too, which I like. And like someone has already said, I could actually totally see this as being a part of the actual HBP book, haha :)
Overall, great job!
I'm very glad you decided to participate in my challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried really hard to think of a scenario where I could keep them both in character, but still give them a reason to interact. I've never written D/Hr before, it was quite difficult. I just love doing fake missing moments :D
Thank you for issuing the challenge! I got a beautiful banner out of it without even having to request :]

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Wow... The way you describe his desperation... just... wow. Great!

Author's Response: Thank you much! I really appreciate it :]

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LOVE! This was so gourgeous, I'm favoriting!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really, really appreciate that!

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That was brilliant! This was a perfect missing moment is Hermione's sixth year. I can actually see this happening in the books. The encounter between Draco and Hermione was very realistic and very much in character in my opinion.

I really enjoyed this and I love your writing style. You're very descriptive and expertly show the character's emotions. I could picture the entire scene perfectly, you really are a talented writer.

Overall, I really loved this! It's defiantly being added to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have never written a D/Hr before, but I really want to approach it with a sense of realism, rather than the fantasy that a lot of D/Hr writers like to employ. The real beauty of a pairing like that is in it's improbability, due to the characterization of the two of them. So I tried really hard to hold on to that :]

Thank you so much, this really means a lot to me, especially for something where I was branching out.

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