Also..this chapter is beautifully written..especially the part where she conveys her feelings is awesome.Simple and natural...with no wind blowing behind her or any of that nonsense...Just a simple down to earth story..Wish he had heard her though:)Author's Response: Thaaanks :) I figured that was more Hermione-like than doing some giant profession, especially considering she just came to terms with the whole thing. I wrote it and I wish he had heard her haha. But thank you so much, I'm glad you're sticking around. Report Review
Ok..I don`t want to be the whining fan-fic follower...but it`s been so long since you have updated...Please update soon.
And about this chapter...Simply wonderful...Please don`t make us wait long for them to declare their feelings to each other.Please do update soon.
(Wish there was a 11/10 rating..I would`ve given that)Author's Response: I understand, believe me it's not whining at all, and I'm sorry. The next chapter is literally in the queue and hopefully will be up sometime tomorrow, the day after at the latest. Thank you so much I honestly appreciate it!! Report Review
please please pleaseee update soon! this is still the best fanfiv ever :DAuthor's Response: IT'S COMING I PROMISE!! I'M SO SORRY Report Review
Love this chapter!!! I can't wait for your next update.Author's Response: Coming soon!! Report Review
I don't think you can understand how happy this story makes me. I am a big harry/hermione fan and this story is just what the ship needs. I like how you are taking your time and letting it develop naturally...33 chapters in and still only christmas. You have developed these characters so much that they are a testimony to your writing skills. I am on here everyday praying that the next chapter is up and am so sad when it isnt. But I know when it does come up I won't be dissapointed.Brilliant writing...brilliant story. I cannot wait for more. You should definately give yourself more credit.
Shannon XxXAuthor's Response: Man all of you leave the best reviews I always smile so hard :) Thank you so much! I suppose I am my worst critic but honestly as long as you guys are enjoying it that's all I can ask for. Again I'm sorry I've been away but as I've said numerous times, no matter how long it takes I'm never abandoning this story. And thank you for saying I'm pacing it nicely, I always wonder if I'm going too slow. Ah, thanks!! Report Review
I must say this this love story is just like a wine getting awesome more and more with new chapters ... Loved the story very much... waiting for your new chapter soon. but till you write i have millions reasons to go through all the chapters again and again. Thank you :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am so sorry I've been away, but life and school just... kicked my butt. But now it's summer!! So thank you thank you thank youu, your kind words are always so appreciated. Report Review
Oh please! How could you be so unsure! I'd love to write a romance this bloody good!
And unlike many authors, this is what I call romance, hun.
I'm so glad you updated. ♥ I plan on writing my H/Hr fic and it's because of you... so while Hermione blames Harry, I'm blaming you. :')
Keep up the great work, and look forward to your next chapter.
-AsphodelAuthor's Response: Oh geez, you're making me blush. It's incredibly humbling knowing I inspired you to write a fic. Like, wow, when I started writing this I had no idea the response I would get from you guys would be so overwhelming and ugh I know I say it a lot but I really do love each and every one of you. When you get your fic up, definitely let me know as I would love to read it!!
Thank you a million times for your kind words. I cannot find a well-enough combination of my own to express my gratitude :) I am writing the next chapter right now, should be up soon! I'm so happy you're enjoying this fic! Report Review
no no no! you can't do this to me! you can't make me love this story as much as I do. I thought I liked it before, but after this chapter, I'd go as far as to say that this is THE. BEST. FANFIC. I seriously will die waiting for the next chapter!Author's Response: I'm sorry! Haha!
Wow, best fan fic? I dunno if I can live up to that ;) I'll certainly try!
Thank you so much. Next chapter coming right up! Report Review
Awe so cute! I liked this chapter... she realized her feelingsAuthor's Response: Thanks :3 I'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
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Yes!! Hermione is finally there! There is my Easter present. I got on today and was having a pretty crappy day but once I saw the next chapter was up I was in a great mood. That's the kind of power you have. With these magnificent words you do so much! I hope that one day my writing can be this inspirational to others! Ok, that stuff off my chest lets get to the chapter itself. I absolutely fell in love with your creativity all over again ( not that I was ever "out" of love ;D). Your portrayal of a frail, self- doubting, and gunshy Hermione is unmatched! She finally admits to Luna, but even more to herself that it's ok for her to fall in love with Harry. He is no longer that thing off in the distance. For the first time he is obtainable for her. The little love potion part was necessary for Hermione to really see how quickly she could lose him to someone else. I also liked how she inched towards telling him how she felt by telling him in his sleep. The marrige conversation at the end set the whole chapter off with fireworks as the finale! Keep up the genius writing! Your ever faithful reader, JasonAuthor's Response: Ah, that makes me so happy!! I'm glad this made your day better aw :) I'm sorry you were having a crappy day though. Those are never fun.
But yes, this is entirely spot-on! She's definitely finally on the path she needs to be on, not just in admitting her feelings for her best friend but in helping herself continue to heal and grow as a person. Because ~shocker!!1!11!~ Harry has a lot to do with that haha.
Thank you so much! Your reviews always just make me feel so good about what I'm writing. I will keep the chapters coming! Report Review
Well done. im spechless great turn! love it keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I most definitely will! Report Review
LOVE THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS :) I seriously can't wait to read more! Damn you Voldemort for the nightmares! please update soonAuthor's Response: AND I LOVE YOU :) I'm happy that you liked it! Thank you so much! Update's coming up real soon. Report Review
hey thanks we all the viewers owe a big bow to you as you have created the environment for harry hermoine which no one could have thought but everybody wanted this story... to be honest i did like harry potter series but i always wanted to see harry and hermoine together.
And to be honest when you update the story and when i read it just feels like you are writing everything from your heart and that what makes this story more special :) kudos to you... and please update the new story soon... i am dying to read it :) i have really become a big fan of yours. please continue writing as you are doing awesome workAuthor's Response: Geez you guys just get awesomer and awesomer :) I'm smiling so hard. I honestly do the best I can so you saying this is just. Beyond words. Thank you, so so much. Ah, I can't get this smile off my face!
Okay. Anyway. Yes, haha, I am writing the next one right now! Nearly done. I'm so happy you like it and thank you for continuing to come back :)
p.s.: I know awesomer isn't a word. Report Review
OMG! You do not know how long I've been looking for a good Harry/Hermione story.
While I remain loyal to the canon ship, I was a Harmony shipper first before JK Rowling switch the tables on us.
Thank you so much for this lovely fic. This was more than you keeping to character... it was like developing Harry and Hermione - and even the rest of the characters into new people! Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I really do honestly worry about how believable I'm making them, not only as characters but as the characters we already know, 'Harry' and 'Hermione'. So your development compliment: thank you so much.
I'm so incredibly happy you like it! It is truly my pleasure.
(me too, i shipped them from the beginning!) Report Review
hello, i dont know what to tell as i have never reviewed anyone but honestly speaking there is not a single day that i dont visit this site to read your story and to check when the new chapter will be updated and how soon i will read it.. in this process i have read all the chapters around many times. a big bow from me to you.. you are doing excellent work :) i am waiting for more... please update soonAuthor's Response: Wow thank you so so much :) I have the biggest grin on my face right now. Hearing stuff like this is just the biggest compliment to any writer, like you don't even know. Thank you thank you thank you!
I am a few thousand words into the next chapter, so it should be up shortly! Again just, wow, thank you! Report Review
Okay, so, I LOVE this story! I don't think I can express to you how much I love this story. But, I'm going to try. When I see that its been updated, I get extremely excited, and when I read chapters like this, I think 'eep!' so many times that I may be more of a fangirl than I originally thought! Keep up the fantastic work, and I can't wait for more! :)Author's Response: And do you know how excited I get every time I see a review? I probably fangirl harder than you do!
Honestly, thank you so much, I am so eternally glad that I'm able to write something you enjoy. I will update as soon as I can!! Report Review
Great Chapter! But, I will never stop longing until it is official!! Ok, that just made me sound like a little fan girl, so picture a guy saying it in a joking manner...LOL ;D I have always liked Luna and her ability to say anything she feels and get people to be honest with her too. I feel you captured that side of her very well. The description of a cord was really cool too. It was like a history lesson for the reader as well as the students... I am so glad you are continuing narrating Harry and Hermione's journey because honestly I have fallen in love with your style of writing. Your individual voice just shines through. You can officially say you are over your writers block because you have once again amazed me with the direction of your story telling. (not that you ever stopped amazing me though ;D) I do love how the smartest people in the world can be the most oblivious to people's feelings. I can't wait for the next part of your story as always!! And thank you for keeping the wait short ( my beard wasn't even close to the lengths of Dumbledore's HAHA) Waiting Always :D
-Jason PotterAuthor's Response: Ah, I'm smiling so hard over here. Thank you thank you thank you :) As great as it may seem to you and everyone else who reads this it actually takes a lot to get this quality out, and I'm always iffy when I submit because I want nothing but the best for you all to enjoy. So that really, really meant a lot, thank you.
I'm glad you don't have a Dumbledore beard, though, I can't imagine that'd be too attractive hahaha. Report Review
sorry about the double posting! my ipod does it a lot lately :/Author's Response: That's totally okay :) Report Review
fantastic as always! i can't wait for more :) it seems hermione is finally realizing her feelings! and i love that you get her middle name right. i hate when people use 'jane'. well anyway, great job :DAuthor's Response: This is becoming quite the habit, isn't it? :) Report Review
fantastic as always! i can't wait for more :) it seems hermione is finally realizing her feelings! and i love that you get her middle name right. i hate when people use 'jane'. well anyway, great job :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, that quite bothers me too. It clearly said Jean!
But thank you so much, I appreciate it! :) Report Review
ahh thank you! i thought you had abandoned the novel! it was great as always :D i cant wait for the day hermione realizes she lives himAuthor's Response: Nope! I could never abandon you guys :) I love you all far too much. Thank you so much for coming back, it means a lot!
As for the last part, I think you'll enjoy the next chapter ;) Report Review
wooow i like the turn. but i hope you dont make them suffer when voldermort gets the chance keep writting. don t worry i ll keep waiting for your workAuthor's Response: Thanks :) But no promises with ol' Voldy, hahaha. I'll update soon! Report Review
I absolutely love this story, I've stayed up till one for the past two nights reading this! Need more!Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm so happy you like it that much! I will update as soon as I can! :) Report Review
Hey! LONG TIME no read!! I missed this story so much! How are you? While I waited for this chapter I was afraid school work had completely over-run you and the content of the story would show it...and of course you proved that inkling of a doubt in the back of my mind wrong as always!! ;D As far as ther story goes, I am so glad they were able to stay close onces others came back into the picture. I also love how you show the minute implications that Hermione is falling for Harry just at the speed of a petrified slug. LOL! I also believe that Harry's definition of love was extremely important and honest. It helped Hermione see he was capable of feeling the way he does about her. Reading his description I felt as if it was my belief of what love is vocalized. Once again I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter (and of course for them to FINALLY get together) and I will stay that way for as long as it takes, even if I grow a beard longer than Dumbledore's ;D. Hope you are doing well!
A Loyal Reader
Jason PotterAuthor's Response: Wow, honestly, thank you so much. This truly, truly means a lot. I've been super busy with school and musical stuff and just life in general, but I'm back now! I promise I'll never abandon this story :)
I really wanted to have that whole love-conversation in there, on one hand because I've always seen the topic as interesting but mainly to, as you said, help Hermione see everything in a different light. Now that she's finally opened herself up, we'll start to see some changes ;)
I'm in the process of writing and it will be up as soon as I can! Again thank you for coming back, and I hope you, too, are doing fabulously :) Report Review
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