Oh poor jess. Update soon please 10/10 : )

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I cant decide whether i dislike james or feel sorry for him 9/10 : )

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I love it. Great story 9/10 : )

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I love benjamin and louis 9/10 : )

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Does jess have anorexia? 9/10 : )

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Oh no. This cant be good 9/10 : )

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This is great 9/10 : )

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Scorpius is hilarious 9/10 : )

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Oh poor louis. 9/10 : )

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This was great 9/10 : )

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Interesting storyline.

I don't like Jessica as a character though.
I understand she has some big secret,
but acting bipolar isn't exactly endearing to a reader.
I don't exactly see how Albus is enamored with her?
I mean first she's just a potions partner, then suddenly he gives her his hoodie? I guess he got caught up with "the mystery" or so, but since there was little action in between, it's hard to understand the attraction
I also don't like how she 'hopped from James to Albus'.

Let's see if your next few chapters can improve the relationship.

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Hey! Just a quick question. Could James possibly also be gay? Thus his hatred of louis' sexuality

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Wow, I really like where this is headed. Its not cliche, which is really amazing! Please don't stop writing!

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Oh wow! Please write more! I really want to know what happens next! This is a great NextGen fic! :)

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Oh no, conflict! I hope we finally get to find out what's wrong with Jess! Great chapter as usual :)

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Hmm, I wonder if Louis knows that Ben is moving?? Love the story still :)

Oh, and Fleur should chill xD

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Ben's picture is so cute! Now I definitely want to know who you used for it! Great chapter. I'm glad we get to see more of Ben's and Louis' relationship.

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I just wanted to tell you that your alliterations like: Good Godric, and Sweet Salazar are so awesome! Did you make them up? They really made me happy! I wish Jess would eat! :)

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Cliff hanger, ahhh! Good thing the next chapter is already posted. Gotta run off to read that one, now, but this was great! The James chapter image is cool :)

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Intense! I'm really loving this story more and more with every chapter I read! And I'm set on reviewing each and every one of them, since that's what a good author needs! The way you portray the characters is good. I didn't comment on this before, but I like how Al is in Slytherin. It's quite different from most of the other stories that I read. I like your Scorpius too! I'm curious to know what people you use in the chapter images, especially Jess! Good job!

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So is Jess supposed to be kinda like Luna? I'm curious! really good chapter. Gotta love NextGen fics :)

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Great second chapter! Wow, I feel bad for Louis. I'm not gay, but I really feel for people who are. Imagine what courage it would take! Reading the next chapter now :)

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Sorry, it's taken me a while to get around to reading this! I really loved your Dream a Little Dream of Me story! This seems like it's off to a great start! Good opening chapter! Can't wait to read the rest :)

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Brilliant story! I'm glad your characters actually have well rounded personalities and that the gay boys aren't as weak as shit (pardon my language). Most of the Next Gen stories with slash that I've found have pathetic excuses for characters in which the girls are all jealous, shallow fangirls and the boys all "need someone to protect them". I get that some people are less inclined to fight, but authors don't have to make them so pathetically weak that they can't lift a quill or get a scratch without crying... Sorry for the rant.
So I'm guessing Jess was inspired by Cass from Skins, right?

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How come you haven't updated in ages. You were one of those really cool authors who updates quite regularly but now... you haven't updated in months :/

Author's Response: I stopped writing.

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