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Review #1, by malfoygirl101 If There's a Rocket, Tie Me to It

17th September 2011:
Perfection. I'll always hold her in my heart is such a beautiful line. I want to cry so, so much. I really feel for him. He loved her and still was ok with her marrying his best friend. That's loyalty. And true, true love. If you love them let them go. I want to kill the person who invented that phrase. Anyway, ignore the rambling. I loved the story and that's all you really needed to hear. Wonderful. I mean it.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! People generally run from Sirius/Lily fics, but I think there's such heartbreak and beauty in them. Thank you.

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Review #2, by Prongs05JP If There's a Rocket, Tie Me to It

7th August 2011:
Wow, this was really good! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Now I'm not normally a Sirius/Lily shipper, in fact as a general rule I don't tend to read any Lily/OtherMarauders, but this drew me in and I'm really quite intrigued by it! What a fantastic idea, having them both confess to Remus. And of course there would be the "we could never be together" part of it all, and I found myself almost rooting for them here - which, is an achievement, believe me. And the fact that I love Snow Patrol has only made it all the better. :'D

This is usually the bit where I put in a little CC, tell people what they could improve on to make it an even more fantastic story, and the only thing I could think of was the last sentence, seemed a little unfinished. ALL I could think of... apart from more length! It was fantastic, I would have loved to read more! :D

This was really, really good, and I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for writing it!

10/10 Brilliant! :)
--Nick x

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Author's Response: I'm so glad you read it, then! I totally get where you're coming from. James/Lily, to me, is just the most perfect pairing ever, but I just. I dunno. I love writing about Sirius so much, and that combination is just deadly in the best way, :D
Awh, thank you! Yea, Remus does seem to always be the middle man, poor guy.
I toyed with that sentence a few times because I was so indecisive about whether or not it was a good final sentence or not.
You should check out Shine! It's Lily's version of this letter, and it's much lengthier and has much more detail.
Thank you very, very much!

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