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Review #1, by OliverMoody Chapter 1

8th February 2011:
This work is very well written and is a brilliant beginning to this fanfiction. You're writing style is very sophisticated yet easy to understand. Albus's lack of knowledge on his father's deeds seems highly unlikely, but I appreciate your look on the matter. Despite this, it has clearly been well thoughtout and will provide an interesting glance in the New Generation from another's point of view. Please keep up the good work as I am eager to see where this new take on the story is headed. Well done.

P.S. Do you mind divulging the headmaster's first name? It makes things more connectable, and an appropriate name provides insight into not only his character but his daughter's as well.

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