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Review #1, by maya Lack of Information

25th June 2011:
love it so far it has a lot of funny things in it

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Review #2, by raberbar master mind

24th June 2011:
I can see the direction the story is going in - you could make the action more complex, but I like it. I think there is some more clarity now.

Keep going!

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Review #3, by stag of light Lack of Information

1st May 2011:
hehe i was at church and my freind made his communion and that was with 2nd graders and he was sooo tall it was funny! haha but anyways... good job on the story and btw- when you made Al say that he chose the second choice, its spelt 'latter' not 'later'. just a heads up:) ok i be gone!!! *exits to star wars theme song*

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Review #4, by lauradoodlez Lack of Information

1st May 2011:
Great plot, overall, but I sometimes get quite confused on what's happening. I think it would be a little bit easier to read, if you added just a tad more details.

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Review #5, by stag of light Hello

1st May 2011:
that was a good chapter. you can tell those two will end up together and i like alexis's evil mind. mwhahaha. anywaysi will reveiw again so... adios amigos!

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Review #6, by Stefobie23 Lack of Information

21st February 2011:
Really good job I really liked this story. Alexis is just hysterical this story its going to turn actually really well can't wait until they get to hogwarts and everything gets even better. Can't wait. Write fast update soon.

Author's Response: Just thought you would want to know I put up two more chapters


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