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Review #1, by starryskies55 Open Cage

12th February 2012:
I'm loving the 'random story' button on the archives, and I think this one-shot was perfect. The way you characterized Ron was amazing, and surprisingly canon, and I love the way you wrote this.
The only quibble I have is that would Ron really have immediately Floo'd Luna?
This is perfect in every other way, well done. 10/10.

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for your kind words! I like to think that Ron would wait a a while to collect his thoughts before he would Floo Luna. I probably should have written that part better, ha ha. Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #2, by Person Open Cage

4th November 2011:
WOW. That was realy heartfelt and beautiful. I'm a big Ron/Hermione supporter but I agree, what did they have in common? I'm a little disapointed 'cause I was looking for more of a Ron/Luna, but rally heartfelt and all that...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, even if it was out of your comfort zone. :)

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Review #3, by firephoenixsong Open Cage

1st May 2011:
Very good piece of work, a little short for my likely, but still good.

Author's Response: Yeah, I have a habit of writing short stories. I have a couple longer ones that I'm working on, but I honestly have no idea when they will be finished. However, I thank you for reading my one shot, and I'm glad you liked it! :D

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Review #4, by Miss Haggan Open Cage

29th January 2011:
Awk that was oddly sweet in a way. Most people write Ron as an asshole, but you managed to make him the sweet tender person that he could so easily be in the other stories.

My only problem is that it's a one-shot :P. This would've been a great plot in a more detailed story.

But Hey it was still good.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. :)

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