Intense. And I like it. It makes Sirius seem so hot, which he is. And in all of your stories (the ones I have read), the lack of a whole lengthy plot hasn't bothered me one bit in this. So, good job. You made me get lost in the story very well.. :DAuthor's Response: I was definitely going for intense, so I'm glad you got that. I was going for a hot Sirius too, so I'm grateful for you picking up on that too!
You're making me blush, stop ;) Report Review
I really liked this!
The whole thing was put together brilliantly, and I loved the fact that the girl, Dagger, wasn't perfect. If she was perfect in every way, it would have turned me off the story.
Well done, keep writing ! :D xAuthor's Response: Nobody's perfect, but some are close to it, and think they are. Dagger knows she isn't perfect and flaunts it well.
Thanks ever so much :) Report Review
its good. really good though i didnt think Sirius went to muggle barsAuthor's Response: Yeah, I just sort of suspected it would be part of his inner desire to rebel, you know? I kind of imagined him visiting one in the summer holidays or something.
I call it creative license ;)
Thank you Report Review
hm... interesting. i like it! =]Author's Response: Yay, first review for this! :D
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