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Review #1, by nirvana14 Chapter Two: A Grim Beginning

6th February 2011:
I am really impressed. This is good stuff. I don't know why but it kind of drags, maybe because your chapters are long. Anyway, it's still awesome. You have a great vocab and fantastic control of English. 8/10

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