a very potter musical is awesome it would be great if you could add more chapters to this cuz i wanna find out what happens next :)

Author's Response: I never thought of adding more chapters to it... I might just do that once I stop being insanely busy and actually update my novels! Thank you so much for the read and review! :)

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Very good! Quick question though, who is Sam? Is he Scorpius' little brother or something? Just wondering! Superb other than that though!
10/10

Author's Response: He is indeed :) I used him as he's Lily's main squeeze in my current WIP novel Lily, Lily, Quite Contrary :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

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Very creative and I practically burst out laughing (only did because my mom would think I was crazy) when you put that AVPM allusion in there!

Author's Response: I'm so glad everyone liked that! Thank you for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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I like this! Very cute!!
Good characters, you could definitely write more ;).
But it's a great one-shot. 10/10

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I may write more later on. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Wait, so is she 23 or 21? You mentioned her as both.

Author's Response: She's twenty three but I have to go back and fix that xD

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First I want to say thank you for entering and completing the We're Pregnant Challenge.

Your one-shot was really good. A little short but it was still good none the less. I really liked how you had her kinda hiding behind the couch and afraid to tell him because i think most women would be scared to tell their husband that they are pregnant. Especially when they weren't trying to get pregnant. I also liked that it was a Malfoy that she fell for and married. It added a little different element to the oneshot as well.

Altogether you did a good job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for putting up the challange! I loved writing for it and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I can't wait to see whether I made the cut haha. Thanks :)

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This. was. adorable!!! SO CUTE!! I love how she was hiding behind the couch when Sam got home :) Hahaha!! This was great and very well written!! You never fail to write a good story!! Its always exciting to see that you have a new story! XD

100/10
-Graceyn

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Graceyn! You always make my day with your reviews! I love writing and I ask myself if you'' like it when I do now haha. Thanks for your constant support!

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I think you could have got another few chapters out of this story. Apart from that I had to smile when Lil was stumbling on how to tell her husband about the baby. A greatly earned 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you! I may write some more to it because it would be fun! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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OmG...caught the AVPM reference...if that was intentional, you are now officially my favorite person on this site!! Oh, and I FIND this story very impressive :)

Author's Response: It was intentional haha and I'm glad you liked it! thank you fort reading and reviewing!

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