I loved... It's already one of my favorities!
I'm going to read more from you!
:) Report Review
I really loved that story. Even though I like the gooey sappy stuff, I loved this because it was real. Great Job.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it enough to review - these are meaning a lot to me nowadays! Report Review
awww, this was a really great one-shot. the whole tragedy behind Hermione's past was heartbreaking but the interaction between her and Draco was very original and beautiful. they reacted very well together and you portrayed their relationship very realistically. wonderful job. keep up the amazing writing! (:Author's Response: he. VERY HARD one-shot for me. I hadn't been writing...totally signed up for a ficexchange, and almost cried when I remembered. Had to write this very fast, so I'm happy that it came out good enough to love and to praise! Thanks so much for all these reviews. Report Review
i really loved the dynamics i found between your Hermione and your Draco. a lot of the traits you gave these characters and other minor ways you tweaked them seemed to really appeal to my perception of them. great work with this chapter and i can't wait to get reading number two as soon as i can. wonderful job on this chapter. keep up the amazing writing.Author's Response: I always feel like I'm not giving Hermione and Draco justice, because my writing style doesn't exactly match up with JKR, but I try. Great that you find it plausible, though, because seriously, I feel like I'm botching them up so much! Report Review
great job, one of the best I have read in a whileAuthor's Response: Thaaank you :). Report Review
This is such an interesting-textured story. The writing pace totally mirrors the plot line. It felt agonizing slow; I could feel the fighting/conflict/irritation between the two and the behind-the-scenes attraction mounting; and the emotional and physical release and safe harbor of choosing to open up and trust. It's really well written. And plausible, too! Thanks for sharing your talent.Author's Response: Goodness, plausibility is so important to me - so that's absolutely amazing to hear! I'm glad you could feel it, as well, since I remember rewriting this so many times to get it just right. Still a little bit off to me, but I like it. Report Review
well done! i want more. what happens next?Author's Response: The second chapter is the last one, unfortunately! Report Review
loved it and will read onAuthor's Response: The only chapters, though... I hope you loved what you read! Report Review
awww. i loved this one so sweet!! i want a sequel!! or an epilogue where they get married and have their happily ever after =P =D
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The way you avoided cursewords was really childish and frankly it detracted from your story more than a little. I also thought the name changes were unnecessary.Author's Response: HAHAHAH. You do realize, because this is rather narrow-minded of you and said in a very rude manner, that you should never read fic from this site on April 1st? Or the day before that?
The site changes names, phrases, and basically anything under the sun they feel like changing. Report Review
iloved it.! i didnt want it to end you should really write a sequel or something to go more into their relationship cause it ended way too soon.! =) keep up the good work Report Review
This is AMAZING! So glad I found this. I've got chills from it!Author's Response: AWE. *hugs* I'm glad you liked it this much, and that you chose to review, too :).
It means a lot. Report Review
Very nicely written - still seemed incomplete even with the second part. Oh well, I always want 'more' when it's a D & H love story that's perfectly executed.
Thanks for sharing.Author's Response: loool, I've heard that it wasn't enough, or that I should add another piece, but this was the plot...and that's that.
AND YES. I KNOW. It is like that for me, too.
Anyway. Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
Liked it a lot :)
How the relationship between the two of them evolves is so truthfull (in comparison to the characters in the books), it's refreshing.
Nina xAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you found the progress realistic, and that you liked the story! Thank you so much for the review. Report Review
absolutely loved it! one of the best i've read.Author's Response: Awe - that's very nice of you to say! Thank you for both the compliment and the review :). Report Review
well i think its cool :)
cant wait for the next chapter :) and wonder what the antique is? :D hehe
xx waiting in anticipation!!! Report Review
I really enjoyed reading it. I'm really glad though that you said this is part one of two because there is definitely much more to this story! I'n waiting for the next installment, great job. :)Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked the first part enough to be impatient for the next, lol. HOPE YOU LIKED IT :).
Thanks! Report Review
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