"Who said that? I certainly didn't. You asked 'whose body could be finer' and I merely suggested that James' body might be."
^ Best line ever! It totally sent me into a very unflattering laugh and people gave me weird looks, but it was worth it! The banter between Sirius and El is TOTALLY fantastic and hilarious, and the relationship between El and Remus is sweet, yet real. I would say that the whole Remus-jumping-off-the-Astronomy-tower thing is a bit far-fetched because of the fact of magic, and if Remus really wanted to kill himself after almost killing his girlfriend (which I completely believe), I'm thinking he would have picked a less public way than jumping out of a window. However, it did make for a good storyline and I'm a sucker for happy endings! :D
Good job and keep writing! :)
-KBDAuthor's Response: Thank you!! :D This review totally made my day, haha! I completely understand what you mean about the suicide method, I only picked it so they would find out about it beforehand so El could save the day xD Report Review
You are VERY talented.
By which i mean, this made me;
- slightly scared
Not many stories manage to do that.Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I don't really know what else to say, haha xD It was something that popped into my head a year ago so I wrote it and kind of forgot about it for a while. I just posted it on a whim - you've made me glad I did :) Report Review
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