Love, love, love this chapter.

I love Sirius' deep emotion at start; how he's really evil and sadistic one moment, then breaking down in tears of depression the next. You described that so well.

I also love that you included Lucius in this chapter; he's actually a favourite of mine and you got his character down to a 't' :) Also the little threats they were hinting towards one another is very believable!

And ofcourse... The Ring! Brilliant... fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Please update soon, i love your story but the wait is killing me.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Sorry for the wait... Uni has started again and I haven't got round to updating... but don't worry, I've nearly finished the next chapter so you won't have to wait too long :)


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I really feel for Lucia in this chapter... how awkward! :) Good chapter!

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So glad you've updated :) I literally love this story... there's so much drama.

This chapter was just so exciting, I was blown away when you changed it that Pettigrew actually got caught and Sirius is now a free man. brilliant! I'm excited for future chapters!

And I just love Harvey, I love his character; the fact that you've made him out to be like an older brother to Sirius (like James). Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you love Harvey, i really wanted to make his character very likeable. Thank you for the review!

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WOULD YOU PLEASE UPDATE!?!?!

Author's Response: Oh my word!! I honestly thought people stopped reading my story so I haven't written anything else lol SO PLEASED WITH YOUR REVIEW!! I will definitely update now!! :) Thank you so much!

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please. PLEASE. update. please

Author's Response: I'll get back to work!! Thank you so much for your review and letting me know that my story is still being read! :)

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I'm in love with Regulus!!! He really does love Sirius! *tears* God my eyes are about to fall out, i've read so much of your story in such short time lol but that's a compliment... i can't stop reading it!!

Author's Response: Haha... you really have read loads! But i am so grateful that you continue to read it!

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Sirius' flashback was amazing! It's the first story i've read that puts Sirius' first experience in Azkaban in so much intriguing detail... oh! and is the womans arm Bellatrix's??
Oh and who is this mystery voice??? I want to know so badly!! Next chapter!

Author's Response: :) Just keep reading and you'll find out!

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No Reveiws?? why is this? this chapter is your darkest so far! So much depth into how the muggles were tortured is was actually quite tense to read... and I loved that. And Oh No! Get Sirius out of there! Please!

Author's Response: I know... Poor Sirius! He's in some mess now! Hopefully someone will save him... ;)

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Yes! 100 points to Sirius for throwing shit back in Maurice swanns face! ha! Good memory!

And Harvey a shifter?? That's different :) and cool! Harvey is starting to become one of my fav O/C's in this story! Hilarious that he turned Sirius into a bunny. again I love the chapter title!

Author's Response: I love Harvey too! Thanks fro your review!

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That was such a heart warming chapter... seeing how James was so worried about Sirius going home! I actually love them two :)

Author's Response: Me too! Thanks for your review :)

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I can just picture The Fat Lady's face when she realised Sirius was the one who said the password haha... loved that bit! But gr... that Aeron!! So there's a good brother and a bad brother??

Author's Response: The father is Aeron's influence; a very bad one :) but yeah, the Fat Lady's face would be priceless :)

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I am so lost for words with this chapter... this is definitely one of your best chapters! It's so deep. For Sirius being known for his confidence; it's so great that you pinpoint out how vulnerable he really is! Well done... absolutely amazing!

Author's Response: I think it's so important for people to understand Sirius' vulnerability. There is so much variety to talk and describe about him. Love him :) And i loved writing this chapter!

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Wow! Harvey's tale was really interesting... this story is giving me such a different outlook to The Prisoner of Azkaban... I just sooo wish people would appreciate how great this sotry is! If i ever read The Prisoner of Azkaban again (which i most likely, certainly will) i will definitely think about your story and how it fits in so well!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! That was just one of my goals for this story! So glad that you think that! Thank you!

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I don't know why but i really liked Lucia and Severus' conversation... maybe it's because you are so true to his character!

Author's Response: I love writing about Severus. He's such a great, strong character and I just love him to bits!

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Lucia's brother?!? It's Harvey omg! did not expect that! Arrrghh... i just want Pettigrew caught now!!

I love how you put Dumbledore's answer like a cliff hanger... he's not exactly answering Remus' question. Really enjoyed this chapter! well done again!

Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah, Harvey plays a big role in this story! I'm trying to make him like a James to Sirius :) Their relationship is quite strong :)

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Hahaha... Funny..but sweet and very cute! Hopefully Sirius will get another chance!

Author's Response: We'll see ;)

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Ooh. and the plot begins!! Love the dream btw dark, sexy and haunting! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks :) x

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Great chapter! It made me feel quite sad though; just seeing how Sirius is so worried about Regulus joining Voldemort! Put put everything so perfect with words! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Again :)


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Accomplice??? What accomplice??? hehehe... Now I'm excited!!

Author's Response: >:D (Mischievous grin) all I can say to you is to keep reading and you will find out!

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:O That...was...absolutely.hot! haha

Very clever that you made it into a dream... i was getting all confused since Lucia is a shy kind of girl! Brilliant writting as usual... love this story! :)

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Heya!! Back again... I thought this chapter was really really good! We're beginning to see the doubts Lucia has hehe... and poor remus! He's so paranoid! But truthfully. I WANT SIRIUS AND LUCIA!!

Author's Response: haha... well just keep reading to find out what happens between them :)

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Regulus!! I love him! AW this chapter was really good! The way you describe Sirius' rage when he finds out about regulus is just so intriguing! I love love loved it!

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That was tense! You really make the reader feel for Sirius! Even though I'm definitely rooting for him to get back with Lucia, I can't help but feel sorry for Remus too... He's torn between a friend that he misses and the hatred of a friend who "betrayed" them all. If only he knew lol Can't wait to get onto the next chapter becasue this one was amazing!

Author's Response: This is going to be a recurring theme throughout the story! You've hit the nail in the head with this review :) Thanks so much!

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Is it just me... or do you describe Sirius in the hottest of ways? I was getting flustered reading the part when lucia goes to visit him! They are really cute!

The banter at breakfast in the Great Hall was very well written! Just the randomness of someone throwing jam at Peter while Sirius was taking about his (cough) injury lol I just love how you've characterised James. He's just- so James!

Author's Response: Hahaha... i do try to make him as handsome as JKR made him lol
though stay tuned... more steamy Sirius/Lucia moments to come :)

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