As usual, absolutely astounding. Great job. I always love reading your stories, keep them coming! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Amazing one-shot! I hate how everyone just sort of overlooks Peter. All these fanfics about the Marauders, and they only seem to include Remus, James, and Sirius. But here, you have done something that makes sense, and that's saying a lot. Perfect mix of flashbacks and present, and the whole seeing-Harry-as-James-and-Ron-as-Sirius thing was very well thought of. 10/10 for (in my opinion) what passes for a perfect one-shot!Author's Response: Oh wow...thank you so much! This really means a lot.
I am glad that you liked it!
Intense! I really liked it! I always wondered what Pettigrew was thinking as he died, and you did a really good job portraying it. I loved the way that he was mixing up Harry, James, Sirius and Ron in the last moments of his life, and I loved the link between the Trio and the Marauders. Really great work! I'm so glad I read this.Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it =)
Fun Fact: When I was on book three and first heard of the Marauders, I was absolutely positive that Neville was going to be the Trio's Pettigrew. No jokes. So then when the Trio didn't follow the Marauders, I was shocked! But I always found those little parallels. Like how Hermione was the smart one like Lupin.
Really glad you liked it! And thanks for the review! Report Review
It's really good to read something from Peter's point of view. I really enjoyed it. Well doneAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing so kindly!
~Nessa Report Review
Wow... this was deep and extremely well written. I thought you portrayed all the characters spectacularly and you had humor mixed in well.
You are a marvelous author,
P.S sorry for the short review.Author's Response: Short reviews are no problem at all. They are still reviews, are they not? =)
I am glad that you liked it. I have never worked harder on any other one-shot, and I am so happy to see it is not in vain! I am so glad you liked it!
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This was such a great story! Hehehe, Quiddich scar. I liked it how it didn't make Wormtail out to be the bad guy (I know he was, but still), and shows that he was sorry for what he did. Awesome effort!! :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you LoveLightLily! I am glad you liked it =) oh Quidditch scars...
And it was hard for me to write this, because I HATE Peter so much... but it was also an interesting challenge that I think turned out pretty well and I'm glad you did too.
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