I honest to Merlin have no criticisms to make! This is a great story so far. Your plot is developing nicely and your flow and characterization are fantastic. All, I can say is thank you for having me read your story and keep up the great work!Author's Response: Really? Thank you sooo much! It really does mean a lot! Report Review
Okay, I am siriusly intigued (so much that I used a HP pun!). This was an awesome beginning! You have caught my attention!Author's Response: yay thanks!! I'm so glad you like it! ahha diggin' the pun :) Report Review
This is so awesome, I can't wait to read more! Update soon! x ElyAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next one now! :) Report Review
Lovely story write soon plsAuthor's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished! Report Review
Loved it, great start, great characters. Hoping that there'll be more of it soon! xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks :) I'll try to! Report Review
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