I won't ignore the shortness, darnett! Anyway, this explains alot but Astoria, you naughty girl! I don't think getting a kiss from Malfoy is worth anything in my opinion but that's just me. Great chapter and I'll be looking forward to the epilogue!Author's Response: Neither do I, but I had to keep her in character for this story. There will actually be another chapter before the epilogue (dramione Report Review
More answers, more questions! Crap! And I never really expected Astoria for anything but it all sort of fits now but I need explanations! Continuing on, another good chapter!Author's Response: Haha, I think she had a lot of potential as a character in the books so I like to write with her. Thank you again! Report Review
This is very late but I'm sorry for your loss and I hope everything turned out all right. Anyway, the shortness is a killer but I tend to over do it on my own FF (And get rejected for other...more annoying reasons) but it was all so perfectly wrapped that I can complain about nothing!Author's Response: Oh, thank you, it was a while ago but still appreciated. I know, I know it's short. I'm bad at writing long stories (I hate rejections too). Report Review
More mystery but slightly more answers! Argh! I'm so impatient but I'm going to stick through until the end, as promised and leave you another review! There's nothing for me to say at all!Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear you're sticking through it. Again, thanks a ton! Report Review
I love it! The fact that Hermion may have had another life is worthy of a FF alone but to add in murder and secrets and quite a few lies, is excellent! Adore it completely and I hope that no one boots me off this computer because I plan on reading this until the end! Luckily for me, my mum isn't home so huzah!Author's Response: Haha, well I'm not the only one who gets kicked off her computer then! Lucky you :) I'm glad you like it, thank you so much for all the reviews! Report Review
Oh, crap. That didn't go exactly the way I thought it would at all! Sounds like another reason people shouldn't drink if they wind up snogging Malfoy (Ick) but I like the pacing and all that sort of thing, though there is still alot to be revealed, I am more than eager to read more!Author's Response: Ick? I am jealous (jealous of my own characters, that's messed up, huh?) of her! I'm glad you like it, and again, thank you so much. Report Review
Ugh, my own computer is annoying me too! Stop logging me out of this site! Argh, anyway, excellent chapter and I love that there's even more mystery being wrapped around and that the trio is starting to sink with guilt. As they deserve, hmf. No complaints at all!Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! Report Review
You should go for like, 5000 words just to keep it going! Haha, but this is a great chapter and its getting closer and closer to what might be actually happening but revealing nothing too shocking or too bold. Absolutely in love.Author's Response: Haha, I don't think I could write a chapter with five thousand words. I'm not talented when it comes to length. But wow, thank you so much! Report Review
I'm not sure if I'm happy that they're getting something thrown back at them or not. Hm...the mystery around this is great and I have no negative comments, because I don't like leaving bad reviews anyway because I'm a big old softie. Ha.Author's Response: Haha, well thank you for another great review! I'm so glad you like it, that means a lot to me. :) Report Review
Another great chapter! I totally love it, I might stay up all morning, as it is currently two am, just to finish this because I'm so fascinated with how you're going to keep it going!Author's Response: Oh my god...well sleep some! Thank you so much, once more, because I love it when people review every chapter, it means a ton, it really does. Report Review
I am loving this! Very well done and I have no complaints! Nothing negative at all and you don't need any advice but more enouragement, even though I'm sure this is finished. T_T (bows head in shame for not discovering it sooner)Author's Response: Thank you again, it's not finished I still have the epilogue to write (which I haven't started shh). Haha, well you've found it now! Thank you once again :) Report Review
This reminds me of something but I can't remember what but it might be nothing at all! Excellent and I love that the three of them are feeling some manner of emotion at what they had done to Hermione, though I'm sure that's only because they'll get into trouble. Slytherins, pfft.Author's Response: xD Alright then! Yes, even though they're Slytherins I think they would feel bad...they all have hearts. Thank you so much, glad to hear you liked it :D Report Review
Merlin's pants! This is excellent! Continuing on with just a slight notice on grammar, my own fanfics suffer from this monster and I am by far no expert (sob). Anyway, great chapter and I'm going to read a bit more before I pass out in front of my computer from tiredness!Author's Response: Haha, I know. My apologies, I know that bothers me too. Thank you again! Report Review
Oh, my. This makes me worry! But its nicely done and the impending doom that's emanating from the kids is brilliant and I'm rather nervous but I shall continue on! Great read!Author's Response: Oh my god, thank you so much. And you've reviewed every chapter! Thank you a ton :) Report Review
Yeah Mia, that was a short, to the point chapter for you. went pretty quick. so in actuality, this was a Draco and Astoria story, not a Draco and Hermione. WoW lol good chapter :)Author's Response: Well, you don't really know. It's not exactly finished. Believe me, I don't ship Draco with anyone but Hermione. Report Review
Come on update already! I want more!!Author's Response: I'm sorry, I've been really busy, and I have a bit of writer's block :/ I'll try to get it up soon! Report Review
Please update soon!! Keep checking everyday and there are no updates so sad!! Loving your story.. Just make the chapters longer please :) and some draco/pansy action!! Keep it up!Author's Response: I'm sorry! I've got writer's block, but I've started the next chapter. Thank you! Report Review
When's the next chapter? I wanna hear more! :-3Author's Response: I dunno...maybe a week? I'm glad you like it, thanks for reviewing. I'll try to update soon! Report Review
100th review. :D but again with the cliffies :( it killed me :/ update, update UPDATE!! Brilliant chapter again, LOVED IT :D pure genius... Do not waste ur talent ;) I hope to see ur books on the stands soon :)Author's Response: Yay I hit a hundred! I'm sorry, I'll do my best to update soon. Happy 11/11/11! And wow, thank you a ton *blushes* I doubt that will be happening, but thank you. Report Review
Hello again! And Happy Late Halloween! :D Oh I knew that Astroria was up to something, I just knew it! And I'm soo hoping that Hermione's not dead, just possesed, that would be wonderful! Eep, but it's soo short! lol, loved it though. post soon, --Gin-ginAuthor's Response: Happy Halloween to you too! Yes, I'm sorry it was so short. I'll try to make the next chapter longer though. Report Review
This was short...realy short, and to tell you the truth a little disapointing. I love this story dont get me wrong, i just think that its a bit slow at times.Author's Response: Yeah, I like to keep people hanging. I'm sorry about that, school has really been busy lately and I've had a ton of volleyball and soccer tournaments. I'm sorry you didn't like it :/ Report Review
The next chapter is not up yet :(Author's Response: Well it got rejected :( Hopefully it could be up tonight...possibly tomorrow... Report Review
Aahh!! ur giving me heart attacks. :O I need the next chapter, need not want ;) the story is brilliant brilliant BRILLIANT!! :D ps - happy birthday! Have an awesome one :)Author's Response: Haha, thanks, it was actually in September but that's okay! It's in the queue, and actually, I think it should be up today...;) Report Review
Please add a new Chapter soon.Author's Response: It is in the queue as of 24 hours ago :) Report Review
I must say this is absolutely brilliant! I love the whole confusion of it all! It leaves me hanging onto every word you write just to see what happens! Please upload soon! :) I really look forward to reading the next chapter! What a great writer/author you are! :)Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! I put it in the queue yesterday, so it should be up tomorrow *crosses fingers* If all goes as planned. Report Review
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