LOL this is good for a first, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! (:
i'll try :D

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Lol that was a funny chapter. I was laughing so hard i had to use my inhaler. the picture of him in shorts was pricelss!

Author's Response: n'awh, thats deary!
& yes, i know right.
silk. PAHAHAHS.

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Eh? It was just a stunning hex. Haha! Anyway, from what I know the younger Greengrass' name is Astoria. So I was wondering if you changed that on purpose. Other than that.. shorts? lol.. xD

Author's Response: the characters in this chapter are light weight i'm afraid xD
but, yes - i did change the name on purpose and thats who Draco ends up with in JKRowling's storyline so ):

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Uhm, you might want to clear up a little something. It stated at somewhere at the beginning that Harry was trying to get through the door IN the Hogwarts Express. But then when Hermione got up to look for a quiet place to read, she found a broom closet which I don't think is in the train.

Other than that, I thought Ron would be the one caught in the act. Haha! Now, I wonder about the girl Draco was with. :)

Author's Response: hmmm, i guess there's no broom closet in a train. BUT I MADE ONE. LOL. Sorry if it confused you abit, though i appreciate the review! :D

& there'll be more with the girl ;D

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Great first chapter. already addicted Look forward to the next one. keep up the good work. I really want to know how hermione deals with this.

Author's Response: awh, thank you!
its my first novella, so I hope you'll be able to enjoy it even more (:

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