{reviewid: 2780304, reviewer: 'MaryAnn'}
5th April 2013:
I can't believe I hadn't read this story earlier! It captivated me from the first chapter. Engaging read, the way you portrayed Zeta, and have her change gradually was perfect! I can't wait to read more!!
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{reviewid: 2778972, reviewer: 'Missy'}
31st March 2013:
I have read a lot of albus/oc fics but this is honestly my favorite al I've read. He is so "good" but is still slightly mischievous and very fun. This story is great and I look forward to reading more, especially now that zeta has grown a back bone!
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{reviewid: 2771308, reviewer: 'StoryWriter'}
17th February 2013:
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please update soon
Author's Response: Great news! I have not abandoned this story. New chapter is waiting validation.
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{reviewid: 2771186, reviewer: '%3C3%20this%20story'}
17th February 2013:
Finish! Finish please!
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{reviewid: 2753014, reviewer: 'sal'}
17th November 2012:
JUST READ THE ENTIRE FIC, AND ALL I CAN SAY IS IT IS AMAZING :) seriously perfect, their transition to friendship was really well done and Im so stoked to see what happens, please update soon !
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{reviewid: 2723107, reviewer: 'Your%20biggest%20fan'}
21st July 2012:
More, I need MORE C: i love it
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{reviewid: 2702311, reviewer: 'MC'}
28th May 2012:
Lovely plot, wonderful character, great writing. Loved it all! Keep up the marvelous work!!!
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{reviewid: 2701077, reviewer: 'FOREVERwithYOU'}
25th May 2012:
Ive just read all the chapters in one sitting! It was awesome, really! Bravo!
-FOREVERwithYOU
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{reviewid: 2700095, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
21st May 2012:
Just one more?!? I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Please update soon!
Oh yeah, awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yep, just one more and the epilogue. It started out with more, but I combined a few chapters to make them longer.
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{reviewid: 2699963, reviewer: 'Crescent%20Moon%20'}
21st May 2012:
They kissed!! :D
I loved this chapter!! I wonder if she's going to willingly hang out with them or not...
I can't wait to see what happens next, please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: That is the big question...what will Zeta be like back at Hogwarts? Don't worry the answers in the next chapter ;) Thanks for your review!
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{reviewid: 2699768, reviewer: 'S.P'}
21st May 2012:
Please update soon!
I loved it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I am glad you are enjoying it. I hope to update soon, but these last chapters are proving difficult to get just right.
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{reviewid: 2694626, reviewer: 'Blah'}
7th May 2012:
I must have more! I love, love, love this story
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{reviewid: 2665795, reviewer: 'Zabini84'}
27th February 2012:
Yay! Another chapter and things are beginning to change. Waited for this one and it was definitely worth it. :D
Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon
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{reviewid: 2655107, reviewer: 'justcause'}
6th February 2012:
HA. Red ball tag. Interesting concept. I like it :) Keep going, please!
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{reviewid: 2649728, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
26th January 2012:
This is a really good story!!! Sorry I didn't review for the last few Ive just kept seeing that there was more!! I love the way you start off slow though. You know not rushing things. UPDATE SOON!!
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{reviewid: 2649345, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
26th January 2012:
This story is awesome! I've stayed up way later than I should have reading it but it was amazing and I can't wait for an update!
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{reviewid: 2649336, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
26th January 2012:
That was a good chapter too :)
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{reviewid: 2649335, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
hahaha I loved that chapter!
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{reviewid: 2649334, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
That was a really cute chapter :) I liked it a lot and my sister's and I used to argue about everything from who got the snowman cup to who got the headband with the stars on it so I get the stupid arguments. It made it seem more real. Nice job.
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{reviewid: 2649330, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
I am seriously loving this story :)
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{reviewid: 2649328, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
A week with the Wotter's, this oughtta be good. I kind of like Jessica, I hope she and Zeta stay friends through this all :) And goodriddance to Robert Nott :$
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{reviewid: 2649320, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
I'm guessing they're going to question her about her dad. Yikes, that would suck if they do :/
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{reviewid: 2649317, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
Hahaha that chapter made me crack up :)
I love the step-mother numbers!
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{reviewid: 2649314, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
Oh, poor Zeta. And Malfoy's being a jerk.
I'm glad that you made Draco a little uncomfortable with Albus. I hate it when people make it seem like the Potter and Malfoy parents are best friends. Even if their kids hang out, I just can't see Harry or Ron ever becoming good friends with Draco. It just doesn't work :)
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{reviewid: 2649313, reviewer: 'countrymusicfanatic'}
25th January 2012:
This was great too! You're writing style is really easy to read and there haven't been any glaring typos which alwyas makes it better :)
Her relationship with Scorpious should be...interesting. and I really like Parker.
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