I like cookiez :) and this story :)Author's Response: thanks soo much!! and here are your umm...virtual?? cookies... Report Review
awe i wanted the cheese puffs. ugh fine ill take the cookies 10/10 Report Review
CHEESE PUFFS RULE!!
bevers,moose,eh, and all that k byeAuthor's Response: the cheese puffs are mine!!! i dont like canadian tape by the way, it always sticks to my hand :D Report Review
You keep misspelling the word "thestrals"Author's Response: umm yeah... i am like the world's worst speller but ill work on it! thnx! Report Review
i have to admit that this chapter is absolutely hilarious! but please update sooner!!!Author's Response: i will i promise! i was busy with sports and drama... god i hate drama. but i will update as soon as i can as long as you review again! Report Review
Hurry!!! Write another one! Stop wasting time reading my review! It doesn't matter! I am just one of the various anonymous people who want you to write more cause this story is freaking awesome! Go write!!!
Why are you still reading this review?
Jesus, I'll just stop reviewing, maybe then you will get to work :)Author's Response: haha thanks! the next chapter is in the queu... is that how you spell it??... but it is going to be up VERY soon :)
hey did you know that canadians invented cheese puffs?? grr im mad about that! Report Review
This is a great story...I cant wait to see where you go with it
~KAuthor's Response: thanks... ill try to update as often as i can Report Review
Hi, I'm reviewing your story because you reviewed my story, Sparks Fly, and I decided to return the favor! :) So...i think this story is really funny and I really like the character of Tyler. You just need to work a bit on your grammar...just saying. :)Author's Response: yay! thank you! and yeah... im not the best writer in the world... but thanks anyways!! Report Review
hey its grt i so like itAuthor's Response: thanks alot Report Review
I think it's a nice fic...one little detail...it's not Vepo; that's how its written in Greek but it's not pronounced like this in English. It's actually Nero...hahaha...anyway...
-Lana-Author's Response: yeah greek lesson!! haha thanks im kinda in love with greek mythology! Report Review
love this so far!!! It's hilarious!!
I prolly shouldn't have read it right before planning on going to sleep, but oh well.
Can't wait for chapter 3!
-RAuthor's Response: thanks! it means alot that you reviewed too! Report Review
hi! that was quite impressive for a first fic... I have to say though, it does remind me quite a lot of "dobyismyhero"'s jamesII/artimis one. The whole naming the reader thing as well as the visit to the potter's. Of course you have the rest of the story to individualize it, do you have a plot line in mind already?Author's Response: err... sort of...
well the author 'dobbyismyhero' is the one that inspired me to write the fan fic, so... yeah... anyways, i got the next chapter in the queu (I suck at spelling sorry) but i hope that my story gets better... its just lots of work in school so... but thanks so much for reviewing!!! Report Review
I really like this (:
If I could give advice? I'd say just be a little bit more natural with the humor. I feel like it seems like you're trying to hard to be really funny and it just comes across as scatter-brained, I guess. I was like that in my first couple of chapters for Love Goddesses but then I didn't try so hard and I feel like the chapters are getting better. You have a natural ability for writing, I can see it. (:Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! omg thanks! i really am thankful that you reveiwed!! ok ummm. well i am trying to base tyler off of me so... maybe it will become better.
hmmm... is how you spell 'parmesan' that way?? anyways, thaks sooo much!!! Report Review
I think this story is really good so far and I cannot wait to read more. Tyler definitely seems like a very interesting lead character and I cannot wait to see what she will get up to next? I'm also anxious to see how you will introduce Albus into this story as well as seeing how Albus and Tyler interact with each other? I hope you can update soon.Author's Response: thanks so much!! i am a little stumped but... im just going to go with it. i am a crazy blonde who is...erm...unusual?? ya... we'll go with that! anyways, its my first fan fic and i hope that all the readers will like it!! :D Report Review
I truly dont understand it sorry love!
-apotterAuthor's Response: its my first fan fic... give me a break will ya love?? i may not be the best writer in the world but i am pretty...um...strange?? so i'll make it work somehow... thnx for the review though!! :) Report Review
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