Holy cheese muffins. THAT is the most evil ending I have come across so far. Just...why? Why would you do that to us? Report Review
this so awesome! Finally he has fallen in love with her...but i know shit is about to happen. cant wait for the next update! Report Review
Wow. Some story, looking forward to more Report Review
I though it was an update . . . :(
I'm just going to cry now. Report Review
JUST GET TOGETHER ALREADY. It's killing me. Report Review
OMG I JUST READ YOUR STORY ALL OVER AGAIN! It's bloody brilliant! UPDATE!! Also, if you can, you should make a tumblr so you can tell us easily when you will update and all.. Report Review
I absolutely love this story! It is really one of the best I have read and I can't tell you how many times I have read it even before I was a member! Keep up the awesome work! You seriously could be a writer Report Review
You are the most amazing writer. I really, truly believe this! All of the characters you create are perfect, they go together well and they're so real. Everything in this story, besides the fact that it's fiction, is real. The characters are real, they have good qualities and they have bad qualities, their emotions are real and their reactions to situations are real. I just absolutely love your writing, and for me, this is the best story on this site. I actually have to thank you for writing this!
James is falling! It's happening, I hope! He's such a teenage boy! So bi-polar and predictable and unpredictable at the same time. I'm still mad at him for hurting Victoria and I hope she hurts him just a little bit, for the sake of vengeance.
This has been by far the best chapter yet! I am literally dying with suspense! When is the next update?!!! I must know!
P.S. Is James an Aquarius and Victoria a Libra? I thought that was what you said but I forgot and it would take ages to look through loads of reviews!
Can't wait for the next one! Em
1000/10 Report Review
Okay. You seriously need to continue this right now! If you don't continue this I think I might just die. Seriously this fic is amazing and you can't just leave it like that without an update for like 4 months!! I need you to continue this, pretty pretty Pretty pretty please!!! Report Review
Please update! It's literally killing me! Report Review
update? Update! Report Review
So, so, so good!!! I cannot wait for you to update - please make it sooner rather than later if you can! :) Report Review
Ohmyigod update this story is great i cant grt enough of the james/victoria love story and i hope dom gets back together with tyler and layla with des their all perfect for each other it sucks to see them all in pain Report Review
Woah. I seriously thought this story was going in circles for a couple of chapters but those last two paragraphs were breathtaking! I loved how you had James process this whole thing! Just the imagery of a guy confessing through a girl, beautiful! I hope you up date soon! I can't wait till Vic and James figure out their lives and just love each other!! Though i like her with Greyson too...lol Report Review
So amazing. Please never stop writing. Report Review
this is the best chapter yet.
there are so many things that have been written so well, and the plotline is so well thought out, and your writing style and everyhting - just amazing.
amazing. Report Review
My heart aches. For Layla and Victoria and James and Greyson and Dominique, and their future. I admit, I cried. I don`t know why, but I did. God, I love "The time of Cupids". Report Review
EP James!! I'm so worried that he will fall in love with her and then the curse will be broken and she won't have to love him anymore and perhaps they should snog again I think that will help them both realize that they love each other and are meant to be! Haha I'm excited can't wait to see what's up next for these two Report Review
OMG! FINALLY!!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
wow. Oh WOW.
♥ Report Review
OH MY GOOLLYGEE!!! This chapter was so friggin beautiful you don't even know. It was more deep than usual, but in a good way, like James finally started to understand life. I love that he's so thoughtful in this chapter, and you know he really starts to THINK.
The little bit about how love is dysfunctional now(and the whole dysfunctional quote was beautiful as well) and illegal things are nothing to us, and we feel the need to be 30 and mar the child-like image of love we should still contain, was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Like quite literally changed my life for a second there. His so called "revalations" were so heartfelt and written beautifully and I'm just like breathless because the words were so friggen awesome.
AND OH MY AH!!! I'm freaking out, I'm just as confused as James sometimes. Like I legitelly think sometimes he's just attracted to her, or cares for her to a certain extent, but then sometimes I'm like HE HAS TO BE IN LOVE WITH HER! And now that she's saying that, I'm like...conflicted. I still don't think he loves her, but deep down I think he wants to love her. And he hates that he can't be her perfect guy, but at the same time isn't going to change himself to become the perfect guy either.
And to boot, I've always been confused with Vicky's feelings. Like I think her hate sort of overpowers her infatuation, but then she has moments where she's completely in her own mind and I'm not sure whether her feelings of disgust(which is sometimes clearly not true as they're having a completely sane convo) or the fact that James is falling for her so the feelings not as strong.
BUT NOOO MY JAMIE IS LOSING VICTORIA!! I love James's character, he's so friggin complicated, I don't even think he knows how he's going to react to the next situation he just...kind of goes wherever his heart leads him. Report Review
QUICK UPDATES YAY! that was amazing. i loved it. i love the potter/victoria dynamic. though i wouldn't be upset if they snogged soon... just saying... :D haha. update again soon. i love this story! Report Review
Holy cow. HOLY FREAKING COW, my friend.
HES IN LOVE WITH HER! And greyson is so lovely but I hate him cus he means jamoria doesn't happen. Never mind James, I am the confused one right now. I like greyson. AGH.
Can you update this one just as often? Please? Because I need to see what will happen. Now. Hdudhdisdhj.
How long will it be until they get together? Like in chapters? I can't wait! Holy hluffenschlaff.
Shindig :D Report Review
I got mega excited when i saw yet another update! Seriously, so much just happened i feel like i'm still processing it all. Things still seem really messed up, but i'm just so damn glad that James is finally starting to feel something for Victoria, but that means that Victoria's going to stop feeling something for James! I mean seriously, will they ever be on the same page?! Report Review
AHHH! James! I hope that slut isn't preggo :/
CAN WE PLEASE HAVE A VICTORIA/ James moment?
Amd please update soon!! I soo love this story. And I'll love u of U update in 2 days!!
:) haha. nice chap. Report Review
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