aw!!! I really liked this! Really incredibly short, but still very cute!
Oh, if you're wondering why I leave so many reviews, hey, it's my thing lol. I never really thought about who might have been muggleborn on the team, but it's definitely possible. great job!Author's Response: Yeah, when I was writing this, I had planned on it being longer, but I didn't think this one out as thoroughly as I maybe should've. Ah well.
I had always thought that Alicia, at least, would've been Muggleborn, because of how angry she got in CoS after Malfoy called Hermione a Mudblood.
Thank you so much! And feel free to review all you want - I'm not complaining ;D Report Review
Daw- I just died of the cute! This is really sweet! I love it! :)Author's Response: Well thank you very much! Do I need to call an ambulance though, cause I'd rather not have you die on my account ;) Report Review
I like the French... this is cute, the first one shot I actually like. Thanks for writing!!Author's Response: I adore French, so it's pretty much a given that if there is not at least one 's'il vous plait' within any of my stories, it's an imposter writing. Thanks, and this is really the first one-shot you like? Well, I'll try not to let that get to my head. Report Review
Well-blinks-this was how I pictured the flashback to be. Rather funny how these things turn out for me. Anyway. A little advice: most chapters should be at least 1,000 words or more. You have bout 500 for this, and 600 for the other one. Why not combine them together. It would make your story longer, and more developed.
Thumbs up for being Anti-Twiligt. :-)Author's Response: Let me guess; you're Anti - Twilight too? Niiice. Anyway, thanks again for the constructive criticism, I really do appreciate it.
I know both Unconscious and this story are short, but they weren't intended to be very long. I'm currently writing another Alicia/Oliver oneshot that's definitely a lot longer.
And these aren't chapters in a single story, they're individual oneshots that are generally unrelated.
Thank you again for your very helpful feedback, I really appreciate it :D. Report Review
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