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Review #1, by Abby Laughing

11th October 2012:
Awesome story! I like it a lot :) Keep up you're amazing work :D

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Review #2, by foreverendstoday Laughing

14th January 2011:
I loved this story!!
Well done, it was very emotional and I really liked the last paragraph...however, there are a few typos/grammatical/spelling errors that you might what to fix up...most of them in the flashback part...e.g. you're/your, choked/chocked, hunny/honey, minute/minuet...but yeah, I loved the way you interpreted that night. :-)

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my view on it! This was probably the hardest thing, emotionally, for me to write, so I'm glad you like it. Yeah my grammar sucks, I know, lol. But again, thank you so much for the review!

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Review #3, by BKL8008 Laughing

14th January 2011:
Very well done with excellent character captures. I think it's a perfect summary of what would have happened the night that Sirius was thrown out of his home. The only problem was that there are a few missing words here and there, and it's not clear what James 'snatched' near the end. Other than that, great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought I did the characters well, I was really worried because I've never written in the point of view of a guy, much less the view of James. I'm also uber glad you liked my version of why Sirius left. I didn't like the idea that Sirius just left, I felt he needed something really big to happen first. And I reread the part about "snatching" and I realized I forgot a word. James was meant to snatch Sirius's bag before Sirius so he could make Sirius sleep in James's bed. Thanks so much for the wonderful first review!

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