I really love this story!!
You've written it really well XD
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, so please continue as soon as you can.Author's Response: thankyou glad you like it.
I have lots of ideas about where this story is going I just have to write them! :) Report Review
james and brenna are totally gonna fall in love :D:D:D
this is awesome to read about, btw.
keep updating. . :)
love christine, a permanent reader Report Review
Brilliancy!! Love it=) (Plz have Brenna take James away from Katrina) Update soon=) Report Review
I love this story , you are a so good wrighter, please update soon/ Bonnie Report Review
I think it was a little unrealistic, but I guess it is a fantasy story so...it works. I would have liked some more detail like what Cook looked like, how old harry potter is at the time- stuff like that.
Nice story, keep up the writing=)
I'll be waiting =) Report Review
The beginning was slightly confusing as there weren't really any "he said" or "she said" tags when people were speaking. It made me get a little bit lost while I was reading it=/
I love where this story is going...keep up the good work=) Report Review
Nice story line, but the grammar is slightly lacking.
I love the fact that she is a vampire and that she took the initiative to try and go back to Hogwarts. I would have liked to see a little more detail about her past or even a description of what she looks like or why she decided to go back to Hogwarts...
Other than that, nice story line=) Report Review
Really good! I love the plot, and the whole story behind Brenna! Report Review
I think the plot line is rather cute, but the flow of the sentences is rather awkward. Perhaps finding a beta for your story would be helpful.
pumbaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing.
I understand what you mean about the sentances.
how do I find and beta? x Report Review
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