Harry sounds a bit too eloquent, but it is very nicely and realistically written. Hope to read more of your stories. Well done! :) Report Review
Very sweet and also philosophical. Your storyline tells us what Harry is thinking as he broods about "what he should have done or said" at the appropriate time to Ginny. Isn't that like all of us to have perfect 20/20 hindsight. We are so brilliant after the fact aren't we? Nice story. You have a nice writing style. Would love to see what you can do with dialogue, sub plots, characterizations, etc...Nicely done. PW Report Review
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