Like the way you start it! You need to be careful with the spacing between paragraph make reading a little problematic.Author's Response: thanks for the review. and yes spacing is not something I am doing, but it automatically spaces like that when I submit it ... I look into it though thanks Report Review
ooh cant wait to read moreAuthor's Response: Yes more coming for Hermoine and Ron, next chapter is coming up very soon Report Review
very interesting...I wonder what her volunteering with have to do with their argument...or not? can't wait!Author's Response: thanks for your review... The next chapter is up for validation.. Report Review
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