Wow, i loved this
It was great how you tied in the song lyrics at the end, but i think it could have done with a little more setting development.
But i enjoyed reading it, which is the point :)
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Officially one of the most adorable stories ever! I couldn't stop grinning after I read it... I was mentally "aww"ing for like ten minutes. And I'm so not a romantic, and I even thought it was really cute! Great job!
Lots of Love,
~Sal~Author's Response: Thank youuu!! :D
Haha Lysander is plain adorable... i love him :) Report Review
Naw so very cute, I am going to fave:)Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D Report Review
So, as I am a beginning writer, I know that people love reviews. Especially seeing as I only have a few :( But this was AMAZING!!! So cute I loved it a LOT! :)Author's Response: Aww, thanksss!!! And yes, reviews do make me happy. :D Report Review
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