Cute, Cute, Cute! I really loved this. Hermione gone Emo, sorta. I would love to see a continuation of this story!Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've never thought to do a continuation, but I'll take that into account. I might just- I need a new project. Report Review
awww, how cute!!! i love how you wrote that only a sketch ago they were merely just friends.Author's Response: Awwe thank you darling(: Report Review
So cute, this is why I love Hermione/George/Fred stories.
Their always so cute & innocent. Ha. :)
10/10Author's Response: Awww thanks! Yea, I like them because of that too- they seem to be a bit more timid on telling their feelings to each other, but soon after that- they aren't as shy or anything. Haha and thank you for your review- I appreciate it(: Report Review
Omg, I love this so much! Omg! You're good writer!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I LOVED IT!!! Ok, I am gonna add this to my favorites, add you as my one of my favorite authors, and, oh, you better have more stories that I can read! Hermione/FredorGeorge fanfictions are my favorite!Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it so much(: And I was gone for awhile, but I'm back and I'm working on a Hermione/George story and this time it isn't going to be a one-shot. I'm really excited to get it up. Report Review
I really enjoyed this, it was very creative.
Christine xxAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review(: Report Review
omg, i really loved it. ;)
even if i like hermione/fred so was this the greatest story about hermione/george. :D
keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it even though it wasn't hermione/fred, that makes me feel really good! Report Review
AMAZING FANFIC! I will check out your other stories this is the BEST hermione/george fic i have read so far!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you really enjoyed the story, it means a lot to me. And I hope you enjoy the other stories(: Thank you for the comment, I very much appreciate it!! Report Review
AWESOME! That was so sweet at the end :)Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
It was okay. I don't think the Weasleys would be playing football though. Maybe Quidditch would have worked better. At the end instead of George you said Fred, just wanted to point that out in case you were to edit it.Author's Response: Thanks. Well that's what I thought too, but I figured the way they would be flying around and what not would be too fast to sketch, so I settled on football (not American football- but soccer). Yes I have changed it, but it still has not yet been validated, but thank you for letting me know! Hopefully it will be fixed shortly!! Thank you for the review! Report Review
i liked the story but you started with George and then in the last paragraph you wrote fred. i am slightly confusedAuthor's Response: Yes, very sorry about all the confusion. It is a George/Hermione story, but as I happened to be writing a Fred story too about the same time, I got the two stories mixed up. Glad you liked it though, means a lot to me! Report Review
i enjoyed your story. if you could only fix your name confusion. you have george in the room, but then you say fred kisses her.Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I know, I was also writing a Fred story around the same time and got a little mixed up. I'm sorry about that. I have already fixed it, I'm just waiting for it to be accepted. I am very sorry about the confusion. But I'm glad you enjoyed it non-the-less. Report Review
Cute story. Was a little confused though. Did she like Fred or
George? Mentioned both.Author's Response: Yes, I didn't realize it until people pointed it out for me. I'm sorry about that. But it was actually supposed to be George. I guess I got confused because I also happened to be writing a Fred story about the same time. Thank you for the review!! Report Review
This is great! I love the idea of Fred/Hermione in general, and you did an excellent job of illustrating their relationship... It's so unlikely, yet it works!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's actually supposed to be George/Hermione, I just happened to mix it up in the end, sorry about that. But thanks for the review! Report Review
Interesting fic. I like how the emotion grew as the story went on. I would have never thought of Hermione drawing or sketching anything, but you made it all believable.
Detail was well done.
Nicely done all in allAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad you found it interesting! Report Review
Ending sort of confused me, was she kissing Fred or George? cus I thought it was a Hermione-George flic, its good though I really liked it!! = )Author's Response: She's kissing George. I'm so sorry, it is supposed to be a Hermione- George flic. I have no idea how that happened! But thank you! And I'm fixing my mistake now! Report Review
How did it go from George to Fred??Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I had no idea that I did that! I'm going back to change it now. I guess I got confused because I was also writing a Fred story at the time. I'm so sorry! But it's supposed to be George. Thank you for telling me!
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