I love this story so much, and I'm always eagerly anticipating the next chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Your writing is captivating. Report Review
Heartbreaking chapter, but honestly, I am just really head-over-heels for Draco. Really. That's the only thing that I can say. If a guy actually did all of that for me, I don't know if I could yell at him... ever.
The wait for this chapter was well worth it, and I look forward to the next. Report Review
:( I really, really wanted her to be with Draco. He just seems like a better fit with her. Tori and Fred are too adorable though... Great writing and I can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
You've done it again! Another wonderful chapter done, and I cannot wait for the next to come.
xoxox Report Review
GOOD LORD ! Who is it?! Oh my gosh, your writing is superb. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Oh, and just noticed one small typo near the beginning:
She asks Angelina where George is, and she responds saying he's in the back with George...
Just thought I'd let you know :) Report Review
God damn it. There is no way I'm ever going to be happy with her being in a relationship with only one of them. They're both so wonderful, and it's so frustrating!
That is in a good way, of course. You are an amazing writer, and you can tell in the way I'm so attached to everything going on in your story.
I love your writing and I'm forever looking forward to another chapter!
xoxox Report Review
SHE SHOULD END UP WITH DRACO!Author's Response: All I can tell you is keep reading! Report Review
I really love your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I feel like I give the same review every time, but can I help it? Your writing is OUTSTANDING. I have nothing to correct, nothing to insult, nothing to question.
This really is fantastic.
Always a fan,
JeanieAuthor's Response: I don't mind that you say the same things in your reviews, I look forward to them! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like it! Report Review
Every single chapter of this = LOVE.
I don't even know what to write in this review box.
I love your work; you do a great job with your writing.
Forever looking forward,
Jeanie Report Review
Every chapter leaves me hanging on for more. I love this work, and I sincerely look forward to the next chapter.
Keep on writing! :) Report Review
Aww :) Fred's just the greatest. This was such a sweet chapter, and so full of emotion! Great job! I can't wait to read more. Report Review
Favourite story of mine, this is. I really love everything you've put into it. I'm glad she's happy with Fred. I'm very nervous about what's going to happen regarding Draco. It has been very well done.
Perhaps, if nothing else, watch the use of your compound sentences, for a lot of them are missing the comma or semi-colon they need. That is the only tiny detail I have found. :) Great work. 10/10Author's Response: Thanks and I know you're right because that's always the problem I find in re-reading my writing. I appreciate the feedback and I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
I really do love your story. It has been put together fantastically; I hope you know that. I really do love Fred. There are so many stories out there about Draco already, and the Weasley twins are largely ignored in J.K. Rowling's series.
Your take on things, combining both Draco and Fred, is wonderful.
To answer your question, it seems like she cares more for Draco than Fred. In order to fix this, perhaps create a romantic ambiance next time Fred and Tori are pictured together - make Fred do something very special for her. Perhaps this will guide the readers to seeing her love for both Draco and Fred.Author's Response: Thanks for your suggestion, I will certainly try it out. Keep reading and reviewing! Report Review
Oh dear here come the waterworks, that was so sad :'( but amazing 10/10 :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
I don't know what to think anymore!!
As you've read, I'm a pretty dedicated Fred fan.
Oh but I just feel so bad for Draco, and the heartbreak she's going through. I really love this story, and you're right, totally didn't see it coming. Brillant job :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're torn because that's what I want my readers to feel! Report Review
nno! absolutely amazing story! i am in love =] so brilliant! of course i would of liked her to chose Draco but do you know what, i think Fred is better! amazing story!!! Report Review
I feel as if I am the character: happy and relieved but torn at the same time. The guilt about Draco is in my heart, but with it comes the light-heartedness and happiness that Fred brings to the room.
This is a fantastic piece of work. Keep writing; it's a pure talent. :) Report Review
I can understand why she chose Fred,but I don't like her making him second best. I'd rather she'd chosen neither of them.
It's funny,I always wanted her to choose Fred but not like this. Report Review
So I did a cheer when I saw this was updated, but now that she's chosen Fred, I can't stop grinning! :D She did choose him for every one of the right reasons, and I loved this.
You've made my day with this choice. I just want you to know that! YAY!!!
:D Report Review
Yes,say it,"Fred,Fred,Fred,Fred.". Loving your work! Report Review
Oh, man, I really hate it when this happens in my life. Report Review
A decision!? oh you have to post the next chapter soon!
The talk with Harry was very beautifully written, and perfectly placed.
I suppose I can see the reason she likes both of them. but I'm still Team Fred. Love this story :) Report Review
So happy Fred's forgiven.
(I'm cheering for Fred.)
I'm still loving every bit of this story, I can't wait for more!
Your titles for chapters are really cute too, btw. Very creative :)Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story! And thanks, I try on the chapter titles and you're the first one to notice! lol. Report Review
I'm glad she finally forgave Fred. I was beginning to miss him. :) I look forward to another chapter of this beautifully written piece of art!Author's Response: Of course she forgave Fred, who could stay mad at him? And I should get another one up soon after the holiday closure. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Thankyou for posting. I know it must be hard when you're busy. That was lovely - no Draco and lots of Fred,but I wanted them to kiss so much! At least they are friends again.
Look forward to the next one. Report Review
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