Please make another chapter! This story has me captivated. Really beautify written :)

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I need more!! Was a really good story to read :) I hope you keep writing, I need to no what happens! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I will hopefully be writing more soon :)

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This story is great...so much going on and so much emotion. Please post more soon.

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Fantastic story. I love it so much! You're so awesome for writing this and I like all the graphic descriptions - you're really wicked at writing.

I can't wait to read the next chapters, but I'm filled with some sort of apprehension and dread... Well, because we all know what's going to happen, don't we?

I'm so sad for Gwen... I can't believe it, Sirius and her were going to marry and Sirius... died. I can't imagine how she'll feel...

But I'd like to see how you write her emotions as she's protecting Harry. Will she become conflicted as Sirius was put into danger? I wonder whether she'd choose to protect Sirius or Harry...

I think it'd be great if you wrote a Sirius POV of his last moments before he fell through the veil. Of his emotions, of how he felt for Gwen, knowing he'd die. And maybe what happened when he entered the veil. I'm so curious about that!

So anyway, great story and please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I loved reading your thoughts, and I was actually kind of planning on doing the Sirius POV thing :) Glad you're enjoying it!

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I like Gwens character. She is witty, caring and an overall strong character (doesnt take any of Sirius's self loathing crap). I hope the story continues soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I definitely plan on continuing the story! Thanks for reading! :)

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The story is getting better and better!
I liked the flashback sequence of her first kiss with Sirius.

That conversation between Gwen and Severus about switching sides was so chilling.

Poor Aunt Sarah!

(If you can't tell, I am still enjoying the story)

Author's Response: SO glad you're enjoying the story. I loved reading all you had to say :) Thanks for reading!!!

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Poor Severus! I'm glad he's not badmouthing Sirius to her face, but it's obvious they don't like each other.

Your dialogue is so good.

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I laughed at "talk chit chat crap". Gwen has a snarky sense of humor.

So the cold weather weakens Gwen. That was a scary childhood flashback!

I'm enjoying the story, too!

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I'm glad she's the history professor. Binns is terrible!

Gwen and Severus are cute together. It looks like she needs better security smarts. ;)

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Gwen's infatuated with Sirius!

The interactions with Severus are funny. I'm glad Gwen gives him a chance instead of jumping on the I Hate Snivellus bandwagon. ;) She's mature.

Just noticed her last name is Bradley. Miss Bradley is becoming very likeable!

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This was a sweet chapter. I did find it kind of odd that she would give Sirius such a precious gift without knowing if she was going to marry him. Just last chapter she was worried he was going to propose!

I guess she's not worried anymore. ;)

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I've already read all of the story so far, but I want to review some!

I enjoyed the opening premise of the story. Gwen and Sirius together are cute. I have to admit I clicked because I was looking for a Severus/OC.

I think people get nervous when a new character shows too much strength right away, but Gwen definitely has some vulnerability. Maybe she's more vulnerable emotionally than magically and that's okay.

Something I noticed is that you might need more paragraph breaks for easier reading. Your writing itself is wonderful.

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another brilliant chapter - 10/10. keep writing! x

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Alright, so maybe I liked Snape a little teensy weesney micro-molecule of a bit in this one. That's so sad about her aunt though, and her mom :(

Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hopefully developing soft spot for Snape ;) More to come soon!

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Gah, so much tension! I really do hope Sirius comes back soon in the flesh, Snape has me buggin'.

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I really liked this one, much more drama and all that jazz haha

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No me gusta, poor Sirius. Don't take that the wrong way though, I'm still really into the story. You're doing a fantastic job!

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I've never liked Snape and i don't think i ever will. Is that bad? Needless to say, I think I've already chosen a side in this story. ;)

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aw, that was a really sweet chapter :)

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Wow, I was totally impressed just two paragraphs in. I really really really like your writing! I like Gwen already too and her with Sirius is really sweet. On to the next I suppose...

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This story rules!!! x

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what a great story, keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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I love this story, I give it 10/10! Please update soon! :D

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Hi! This is my alltime fave story! Please keep updating! Is there something going on with Severus btw?? Tee hee! x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!!! :) Updates coming soon...I'm on a writing binge and already have Ch. 6 & 7 written. Aaand I guess you'll have to read and find out ;)

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Hiya, you have a real talent for writing and I can't wait to read the next chapters! x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've really enjoyed writing it, and I'm glad you like it :)

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