Hey there ! Great chapter, however i found quite a few mistakes. Victoria knew Draco's name before he introduced himself, which was a little confusing. Do you need a beta ? I'd love to help out, if so just look me up on tdf, i have the same name, and send me an inbox aka pm. (: x pumba Report Review
NEXT CHAPTER!!!NEXT CHAPTER!!!NEXT CHAPTER!!!Author's Response: being vaildated :) Report Review
heyheyhey ! just wanted to point out that you spelt allowed wrong on the summary P: but good job ! and kudos for you for putting this up. im sure in due time it'll be a success ! x pumbaaa.Author's Response: Oh thank you for that! :) lol hopefully Report Review
well hi there, it seems like a great story. keep going, just wanted to point out that there are some parts where it's a bit awkward to read. other than that, wonderful. -tffAuthor's Response: Hey, thank you for the review, I'll keep that in mind too :) thanks! Report Review
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